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March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please make a story with romanov and tanya pairing after his capture and another story this time on the soviet side.
With the comrade-general and sofia pairing. Thank you!!! Great job! :-)
With the comrade-general and sofia pairing. Thank you!!! Great job! :-)
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looking good so far. How do you plan on proceeding?
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mostly well done. You need to proof read not just spell-check. Watch for things like `you' instead of `your', etc. Also, while the sex was pretty well done you should have spent a bit more time on the anal since the whole story was setting up for that. But generally well done.
SailorNemesis
SailorNemesis
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fic. The sex scenes could stand to be a little longer, perhaps, but they're reasonably well written all the same.