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August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well structured and beautifully told tale continuing the Mass Effect story into new territory. It incorporates elements taken from all three games, represents characters both main and minor in ways that stay true to their in game personalities, and is a worthy and heartfelt resolution to the Femshep - Liara romance.
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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your story so far. Interesting twists and the characters are very alive.
Hope you go on with that good work because i think you understood, what kind of person Shepard really is.
Yours sincerely,
Patrick
Hope you go on with that good work because i think you understood, what kind of person Shepard really is.
Yours sincerely,
Patrick
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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet chapte
I've just stared reading this and have no idea why there aren't more reviews on it,
but the story is def one of the better ones on this site. I feel like you might
hold back in certain places- don't!
You're really good at this. And you're plot has me hooked!!!!
I've just stared reading this and have no idea why there aren't more reviews on it,
but the story is def one of the better ones on this site. I feel like you might
hold back in certain places- don't!
You're really good at this. And you're plot has me hooked!!!!
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like your story. . .
Where is the smut.
You've got conflict, action, angst, romance, sexy and awesome background . . . But no smut
Pleeeeeease can we have smut. I know you would be awesome at it.
Where is the smut.
You've got conflict, action, angst, romance, sexy and awesome background . . . But no smut
Pleeeeeease can we have smut. I know you would be awesome at it.
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September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is fucking awesome. Your story woul have made a better video game.
ME4
Yeah baby!
ME4
Yeah baby!
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes it is on ffnet as well but I will be posting the whole thing here is well. It is not done yet there either but it is at chapter 17. My pen name there is spiritwolf71.
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Has me enthralled . . .
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August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I've felt like someone caputred what Liara would really be like after losing shepard so many times. Clingy, slightly paranoid and nervous that she might loose her again, but determined not to be left behind again.
Excellently done!
Excellently done!
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August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Are u still posting the full verion here, or are u also posting the full version on FFNet. Because I just can't read this fast enough!
And I don't want to miss anything!
And I don't want to miss anything!
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August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay
I'm sooooooo jealous . . . .
You gave FFnet 17 chapters and us only 10 . . .
You know your story is amazing, and u got me feinin.
If your story was crack, I'd be stealing tvs and VCR's . . . Yes VCR's pawning them trying to get my hustle on so I could buy another hit.
Damn!
So you like reviews, fine here is one for you
FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AMAZING AZ SHIT!!!!!!!!
UNFUCKING BELIEVABLE!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm sooooooo jealous . . . .
You gave FFnet 17 chapters and us only 10 . . .
You know your story is amazing, and u got me feinin.
If your story was crack, I'd be stealing tvs and VCR's . . . Yes VCR's pawning them trying to get my hustle on so I could buy another hit.
Damn!
So you like reviews, fine here is one for you
FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AMAZING AZ SHIT!!!!!!!!
UNFUCKING BELIEVABLE!!!!!!!!!!!