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by onionbelt

person DrkVrtx
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to seeing your take on Jill/Chris post RE5. Her absence from RE6 is pretty glaring, but perhaps you can illuminate us a little :)
person kirie300
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is the best story ever! Really great job I can't tell you how much I enjoy it and how real it feels! Great!
person DrkVrtx
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Read straight through from the first chapter to the most recent at the time of posting this review, and damn do I want more. This really is a gripping story, and honestly there is nothing I can find fault with. I also enjoy the chapter lengths, they're not too long or too short, and the atmosphere and setting within each of them is crafted very well. In short, amazing stuff. I patiently await further updates ^^
person DrkVrtx
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Also, just wanted to ask: I don't seem to able to find a profile for you, or these stories on Fanfiction .net. Are you aware of that site, or do you choose not to post them up there? I definitely think your works would get a lot of views/reviews there, in comparison with AFF : )
person DST
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Suggestion, I recommend just tacking Ch 2 on to the end of Ch 1. Chapter 2 is so short it doesn't rate its own chapter and would fit perfectly (theme & storywise) on the end.
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your story.
person S.H.
schedule August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story. =)