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August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
No updates yet?! PLEASE DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY!!
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February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, don't tell me this story has been forgotten and/or abandoned!!
I am loving it!
I am loving it!
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January 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why will this story not continue?
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hello? *Hears echo*
Is this story (and its writer) still alive?
Is this story (and its writer) still alive?
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March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well its good to see this story continue. As I am a sucker for a good tragedy, id love for the galaxy to find out hat the krogan are doing and be like "fuck that" and gather the victory fleet once again and go and kick some krogan ass. maybe even have hackett or garrus kill shepard. of course it be really emotional but i cannot see the krogan building an empire being taken very well. Or maybe go the peaceful route of the newly formed empire under Shepard's and Wrex's rule offer much needed aid to the crippled galaxy and the council granting them a seat for all their hard work. Just so many ways this could play out. I cant wait for more.
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice job in the explaination for the pregnancies. Not to sure if it is scientifically accurate but who cares! Also did you get my PM on Fanfiction.net. I think you should try a T-rex or raptor look for the babies. And give the female ones boobs. Just saying. Please update soon.
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dont know if I'm the only person, but with all of Tali's hard work, I think it's only fair she gets rewarded with a couple Krogan dicks.
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It has its inconsistances, but plot in porn of any king is a bonus. I would suggest reading the Mass Effect wiki more closely. Also Please Update Soon!!!
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November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, its good to see Nova's still trying to do the right thing and keep innocent people from being hurt. But there are a few things that bug me.
1. Wrex's plan. I'm gonna go with what Sirius said. Humans aren't ASARI, you can't just expect to magic up some way for them to bear Krogan children. Well, maybe they could have, but you blew out the brains of the only one who might have known a way.
2. Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar. It would be funny if the Citadel honestly WAS just giving out food rations solely for, y'know, the purpose of knowing how many people there are and for building up morale in their citizens, and not for any sort of sinister context. Not everything big government does is bad.
3. The Geth. Just...okay. The Geth. Who were, I remind you, all about self-determination and building their own future...are now helping a race ENSLAVE others. Does the term "hypocrisy" not register at ALL?
1. Wrex's plan. I'm gonna go with what Sirius said. Humans aren't ASARI, you can't just expect to magic up some way for them to bear Krogan children. Well, maybe they could have, but you blew out the brains of the only one who might have known a way.
2. Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar. It would be funny if the Citadel honestly WAS just giving out food rations solely for, y'know, the purpose of knowing how many people there are and for building up morale in their citizens, and not for any sort of sinister context. Not everything big government does is bad.
3. The Geth. Just...okay. The Geth. Who were, I remind you, all about self-determination and building their own future...are now helping a race ENSLAVE others. Does the term "hypocrisy" not register at ALL?
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I see you are taking Shepard down the "accepting slavery" route. I already mentioned I didn't find this really believable but, for the sake of the story, I can accept it.
Nice to see Shepard come into command the way she is, how she handles the diplomatic ties with the Batarians and settles Wrex down.
That was clever with the food transport and the census. I'm really interested in what she exactly plans to do with that information and of course, seeing human women brought in as slaves!
Another good chapter!
Nice to see Shepard come into command the way she is, how she handles the diplomatic ties with the Batarians and settles Wrex down.
That was clever with the food transport and the census. I'm really interested in what she exactly plans to do with that information and of course, seeing human women brought in as slaves!
Another good chapter!