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for The Princess and the Wolf

by JustS

person Anon
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
good stuff
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sexy stuff. Would like to see Zelda having puppies.
SailorNemesis
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do like this story and while I've got nothing against short chapters, I do sort of want them to be, well chapters. This reads more like one scene (one well-written, enjoyable scene) being cut into pieces for no real reason.

Of course, I guess this is because you write and post each part as it occurs to you and if you just fold new bits into existing chapters people are unlikely to notice you've written anything new. Bit of a dilemma, really.

So in the end, I think I'll just say: Write More Please!
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fairly sexy, should be longer and more detailed. Hope for mounting in the next chapter.
SailorNemesis