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Damn! I love a story with plot, just taking a min to tell u I love your story, keep it up!
Please!!!!

Lovely chapter, the new apartment sounds like an interesting place. I'm not sure how to feel about the new servant yet but I'm sure she will grow on me in time, Looking forward to the next chapter.

I rather like this chapter, it feels slower than the rest which is good sometimes to just let the characters have down time and with Ami being ill it makes things really feel like they have slowed. I'm not sure why but it feels like the story tends to revolve more around Sam and Ami's life together than the rest of the characters lately. Might do some good to take the focus away from them for a little bit and let somebody else have the lime light for a little while.

I am rather addicted to this story, it is a shame it's only updated once a week but I know people have lives outside the interwebs.

Anyway, I rather dislike Seliha, or the darker bits of her anyway. I do look forward to seeing what becomes of Sam and Ami when they get their new place. I wonder if the bodyguards will finally get upgraded from background/side characters and placed into more of the story. Oh and I was wondering when we might see the inside of Sam's mind yet again, I wonder how more of Ami's past might effect the look of the place. If Sam might make more changes depending on the over all effect the memories have on him or if Ami might end up making some changes herself without him noticing.

I rather enjoy the little plot twist of the investigation, though it makes me wonder how things will go next. Ami being given some more freedom is a nice idea too, i do wonder though if she will try to take advantage of it a little at some point. Also wondering when Kate and Fosanta might end up having themselves some little blue children.

Yet another great chapter, I am rather wondering if you might do a time skip at some point to a few months down the line or if things will progress day to day or week to week. I must say that Ami is fast growing into my favorite character and I even like Kate more in recent chapters.

Yet another great chapter to this rather addicting story. I do rather think that Ami's dark streak is one of the most fun bits of her character. I wonder though how Fostoria (forgive me if I misspell her name)will take the news of what exactly went on in the basement. Would be interesting to see how Kate handles things over the next few days as well, if it makes her easier to be around or a bit more closed off to the group.

Well I just spent two or three nights reading this, hard to recall which. I find the characters rather interesting and I think the story is rather good. I think my only minor complaint is the lack of "fun" we have had lol though it really is not missed in the long run as I enjoy the character interaction very much. I do find it odd how easily Sam seems to get on with all these things happening in such a short amount of time but I guess it really isn't much different than the main character of any series adjusting to things.

I would rather hope we get at least one good bit with Sam, Ami and Adastra getting together just for the sake of an interesting meld. We don't hear much about any of the other races so far, will we be seeing any Turian or Salarian main characters at some point soon? (I do apologize if i miss spell the names of the aliens as I have a horrid memory for more SciFi species).