rate_review Reviews

I enjoyed this story. Very well written with well-rounded characters. I found myself always wanting to know what happened next, that things would work out for them.

Wow. Such an amazing story. I am new to this world but am now completely obsessed. Your story was one of the best written i have read in a very long time!!

(I'm loli too)

hahaa I've read this now for the second time and I must say I still love this!
I couldn't get it off my mind since I read it the first time, so I felt I HAD to read it once again and I loved it all over again jnfgdjkhnfgjkh!
I adore Sly the most D: god I just love his personality and the way he is around others, sort of cheerfuly optimistic despite the odds. My heart melted all over again when
he and Crystal tell Falcon what had happenned; when he lost his limbs to the dragon going for Rain.
I really like Falcon too :D I also enjoyed the change in Demoncraft,
from being a total ass to being a bit.. softer. haha
I really wish Shattered had as much chapters as this story and Brothers hahah I'd never get tired of reading them !!
I hope you keep on writing, !
best wishes,
lolu

This story was incredible. A little mushy language at some parts but I can deal. Really excellently written, wish I could write whole epics like this! Hope to see more of your stuff and I LOVE the noncon :)

I abolutely adore your stories! I have read Brothers and Forbidden and they were great, just as this one!
I love your writing style and really hope you will someday post more stories!
Another thing I like about your style is that every character seems to come alive with its own personality,
and that just adds more to the story!
Lovely!