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May 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Really great story i hope for more
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Smut isn't supposed to be revolutionary literature. It's sex, pure and simple. As long as your grammar is fine - and I didn't notice any glaring errors that broke the flow, everything's fine.
In fact, I eagerly await more updates!
In fact, I eagerly await more updates!
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July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Actually not that bad. The *ahem* cum farting is a bit outside my tastes, but I liked it. And you sell yourself short. This is smut, we don't expect great literary works of art, we expect people to show us their wild side. Looking forward to the next chapter soon.
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July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fics where hot chicks get knocked up by the main character? very good.
Unrealistic amounts of cum? Even better.
Please continue this story.
Unrealistic amounts of cum? Even better.
Please continue this story.