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January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I agree that this is promising, but the A/N's in the middle of the story have gotta go. Also, you may have inspired me to write something with my sim and DJ Candy.
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Promising beginning, but here's a word of advice: Never, ever put Author's Notes in the middle of a story. It needlessly interrupts the flow and yanks the reader out of the story. You don't want that to happen, so don't do it.