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Oh, I am so sorry, I forgot to mention that I hope you can try and enjoy the rest of your vaction despite the fact you had a dental procedure yesterday morning! I hope you are not in too much pain and feel better soon. Also, it's an honor to be able to read and review your stories. I love them!!!

DaC

Oh my gosh, so much action this chapter and we were also introduced to Luceus' brother Lycineus. I can't wait to find out more about their feud with each other.

I definitely want to read more about 'Commander' Juleus Truth and hopefully see him and Brie hitch up although he seemed kind of interested in Tristtan. There is just something about Juleus and Brie ending up together that just sounds right.

I was really concerned for Traviis when he fell into that pit with those flesh eating monsters, so glad he got out safely.

Bartramm getting beheaded and Grannger meeting his end (I think) was true justice although they got off way to easy and should have been tortured.

Geeze, what is it with you and these cliffhanger, LOL.

I would have loved to see Luceus and Juleus fight and bet it would end as a stale mate (or whatever you would call it.

I hope that Luceus follows Tristtan to Allenmantheia so he won't be alone when he has to stand before his father and the High Elven Council. Please don't let Ulrikk get away with what he did to Tristtan and I am keeping my fingers crossed the Council invokes some kind of punishment to him for his attrocities (sp.?).

Jafton was redeemed in my eyes by contacting his mate Suelia so she could let Lycineus know where Tristtan was thus contacting Luceus so he could save Tristtan.

Oh and I think I forgot to mention that Rosie did a great job healing Tristtan and his arm.

See ya next chapter,

DAC

Hey, it's me ~~~ waves ~~~~

Well, a lot happened in this newest chapter (4) that has been crying for more but I will try and be patient.

So, Reginalld has a feud going with Winestone, Luceus' father. Hmmm, I wonder if they had been lovers?! Interesting thought if I do say so myself.

I like the idea of seeing Laeyla end up eventually with Traviis the sexy Archer.

What really has my interest is the possible forthcoming relationship between Brie and Elven Commander Juleus Truth!! Oh, yes, that would be a battle in epic proportions.

So, Jafton apparently sent the image of Tristtan (that must have been what Ulrikk whispered to him) to taunt Luceus, but I seriously wish that the healer would do more to help Tristtan but he's too scared.

I am literaly bouncing in my seat waiting for Luceus to extract his ruthless vengence on Ulrikk and rescue Tristtan.

I am so very worried about Tristtan and his arm!!!

P.S. I am still pissed at AFF for forcing you to move In the Land of Aborea to the games section. Perhaps, you should have just posted the story as an original.

I meant to say this,

What really has my interest is the possible forthcoming relationship between Brie and Elven Commander Juleus Truth!! Oh, yes, that would be a battle of the sexes in epic proportions.

I left out battle of the sexes, LOL.

I am going to play neopets for awhile because there are no good stories on AFF anymore except for yours and a few others I read. I will check back later and everyday for updates.

Oh my, surprise finding you here, LOL!

Ok, I just wanted to let you know that I will continue stalking this story (and all your stories) like forever.

Please don't think that this story will die a slow and terrible death because that's so not true.... Well, at least not as long as I am around to read it. Please extend it to 10 chapters that would be fantastic!!! Yes, I would really enjoy reading more of this. Plus, I was thinking you could perhaps right a one-shot of how Tristtan and Luceus first met, that would be super awesome.

Your devoted fan but crazy and yes nutty fan,

DAC

wahhhh!
Poor little uke! this is very worrying!! I just want lover boy Castian(?) general to come and rescue him and make it all better again...
and dammit! his general needs to recognise him as the man he is! a capable and fearsome archer... although i thought it was so sweet that he didn't want his beloved to face the danger of war...
and then I thought it was hilarious that the little elf, wanting to prove how capable he is... went and got himself kidnapped...
classic uke move... but then we love them for it, don't we lol

Hei I just wanted to say that I really like your stories so far.You have good plots combined with great steamy scenes and most importantly you writing is really good.The plot flows naturally,not too rushed and not too boring either,considering the length of your chapters (they're just perfect,I hate short chapters).
But the best part is the whole "uploading policy".Event though you will let some time pass between writing new stories at least when you do they will be almost completed.It's really frustrating when you get really bad into a story and realise that the author will update twice a year or never.
I think it's a good idea to integrate some parts with another characters too,so I'm sure it will be all good.
Good luck on writing, I'm really curious about what's going to happen to poor Tristtan.

Oh my gosh! What an evil way to leave a cliffhanger, you naughty author.... shame on you, just kidding!

Wow, so much happened in this chapter and we even got to meet Tristtan's parents for a few brief moments. I like his mother, Laeyla but his father, Reginaldd is a royal no. one jerk. So, he changed after Tristtan was born, I wonder why. I am really curious now as to how his mother is going to react when she finds out her son has been kidnapped.

Oh, poor Tristtan! I hope that Luceus slowly tortures Ulrikk, Grannger and Bartram and then pushes them into the pit and feeding them to those Fallen Defenders who are making a meal out of Tristtan.....

Well, I gotta make this short, we are having a very severe thunderstorm and I am freaked out by the lightening so gotta sign off.......

Well, storm seems to have finally passed to I am just popping in one more time then I have to get to bed it's way too late for me.

I wanted to let you know that I looked at the links you gave us of the characters and they are really awesome! I love Tristtan he looks just like his parents! Luceus is how I would picture him in my mind looking. Ulrickk is going to give me nightmares tonight along with all the lightening we had.

I won't be checking in until tomorrow night so see ya then!