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I am SO happy I found this story again! It was reposted from originals to here and I thought it was not being updated! Anyway, while I could throw shoes at you for making Tristan so miserable for so long I appreciate the delicious angst of your story! I can't wait for a reunion between my two sweet lovebirds!

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Also I am very upset that there aren't more reviews on this story -_- it is clearly a hidden gem!

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Well, I saw your note in the forum and can understand about you not wanting to upload a chapter if it's not 'sub par' BUT I am slightly disappointed because I was looking forward to reading it. I will happily wait it out though and check back in another week or so to see how you are progressing. Have a nice 4th! If you celebrate it, that is.

Oh my gosh! What's going on here? I was worried too that Tristtan could now possibly be a half brother with Luceus but could Saeylas' mother have had an affair with either Tristtan's father or Luceus' father? I am confused, LOL. I can't wait to find out what the heck is going on though. Juleus is a major dickhead (sorry) bad language but he is. I hope that Luceus runs into his friends when he gets to Allemantheia and not his enemies. I am so relieved Tristtan wasn't raped by him but am worried now for his well being now that Juleus wants to cause trouble for whacking him on the head too bad it didn't give him amnesia like Luceus got.

Hey, I am going to keep my fingers crossed that you can find time to write that one-shot of Tristtan's and Luceus' first meeting.

For some reason, I was smiling and giggling like a fangirl at the last section. I totally want to see what happens. Though I highly doubt Tristan is that hot but I'm thinking he is. Argh! My point is I want to see what happens next. Worst cliffhanger, that and I bet Juleus will go for it since he can push the plan on his parents and since Luceus is "dead" no angry boyfriend. Or so he thinks. Ah Luceus corrupted Tristan!

I just re-read chapter and Juleus wasn't in the room when Brie put the crosshairs on Tristtan's parents just them were there. I hope Brie puts him on her radar for revenge because he deserves it.

Good morning, we are going to have a sweltering heat wave today possibly through Friday and this story is not helping me, LOL.

I think Reginalld better hit the high road before it's too late and Laeyla I am very disappointed in you too. I wonder if Traviis will ever forgive her but more importantly will Tristtan?!

I like the Castanica Prime Minister, Lektus, he won't let them get away with what happened to Luceus. Nope.

I loved that Lycineus/Rosie and the soldiers from Herald Fort came and threatened them especially Brie putting the bulls-eye on their heads, LOL, I really loved that part but was Juleus in the crosshairs too because he should have been?!

Oooh, I really dislike Clovon he is a disgusting piece of filth and I bet Luceus aka Tell will put him in his place soon enough for his treatment of Saeylas.

Juleus better the heck not take Tristtan up on his offer to find out what happened to Luceus!

This is really getting good and these cliffhangers are killing me......

I forgot to mention that I am glad Juleus two former comrades paid for what they did to Luceus but Juleus you have to suffer the consequences for what you did to him too. I hope Lucues repays the favor once he gets his memory back. I will enjoy that!

The mighty general has amnesia.... I do so hope that Reginalld and his accomplices get all their titles revoked.
This Saeylas, poor poor thing. i do hope Luceus recovers his memories and save him

Hallelujah if you were to just end it next chapter i'd be distraught... thank goodness it'll be longer than that.

I am very happy you have decided to extend this more than 10 chapters!!!!

I for one will be very pleased when Reginaldd is knocked down off his pedestal of superiority.

It seems like Rosie and Lycineus will now be a family that's a relief and he has forgiven her and his brother by finally accepting Luke into his life.

I am looking foward to the 'rescue mission' planned by Traviis and Rosalinda/Lycineus. There's gonna be hell to pay, haha.

I do like this new character you have introduced, Saeylas, but he better keep his hands off Luceus because the General belongs with Tristtan!!!!!

I feel bad for Saeylas losing his beloved mother and having such an evil step-father. There has to be someone else he can be paired up with besides Luceus.

I seriously really hate Juleus now and hope he doesn't end up with Brie.

Thanks for updating! I've missed your fast updates but know you've probably been busy.