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by RukiRomance

person ReiRavenscar
schedule January 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! The plot really draws you in. Hope that you continue soon :-)
person Em
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was interesting! I really hope you continue it. You should watch you tenses though. Sometimes you write in the past and then you revert back to the present. Characterization and descriptions are great. Can't wait to see what happens next!
person angel_dove
schedule May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. Great descriptions and story plot. Please continue. I want to know what happens to Roxas!