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by RydiaAsuka

person RuneNeko
schedule July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just as awesome :3 i really like this and the ending IS deliciously open ended. I'd like to see this continued, but its up to you. Great job! There was just one mistake that I found. The sentence where Lambda/Richard is telling Asbel to lift his hips. In the story, you misspelled lift as life. Other than that, pretty spotless :3