rate_review Reviews

Wow. I sort of balked at the idea of a Shepard/Grunt fic at first, but once it got underway, man, was it sexy! Very nice writing. The line about Shepard "shooting straight" while sober made me laugh out loud. Maybe that Fornax special Krogan edition wouldn't be so bad after all...

Hot story! I never expected to find Grunt/Shepard slash, though I'd be lying if I said I'd never thought of it before. I love the minimalistic style in the writing, makes the story flow well without bogging it down. Dialogue is especially good, it's rare to find natural dialogue and I think yours is amongst the best. Do write more like this!