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the moment when alice learns of luka's feelings towards illias. priceless :D Keep up the excellent work you are doing with this story!

I really like this reboot of the monster girl story your doing genocide.
Chapter 5 literally had me rolling on the floor with the new Luka actually having a spine and doing things the normal luka wouldn't dare do.
can't wait for the next chapter.

Let's see, Granberia is a give away fight who can be impressed with a minor amount of skill - or at least a monster sword skill, and Tamamo only fights with those that provoke her first. So the first fight against the Heavenly Knights would more or less logically be like it was in the game, against Alma Elma. That's gonna be a tough one to justify, sexually I mean. She has this weird balance between being prideful and having to earn her respect, so... not fighting in the first place or losing a fight are both basically no goes unless you do some creative writing, and you can't push her to far or she'll get serious as the Succubus Queen. This is just me assuming you'll have at least one sex scene for every Heavenly Knight, at least that's what I hope you'll do, they are far too awesome of characters to not do at least that much, and you've set up some ground work for Erubetie already - which was awesome, by the way.

I'm also interested in seeing what you're going to do with the Four Bandits, they also might be a little tricky to pull off seeing as they are... well... childish and would want to keep Luka.

Keep up the good work and fairly quick updates!

Great as always, and huge too! I'm really struggling to find anything to critique in your stories. Keep up that fantastic quality!

I'm really enjoying the story you're telling. It has a lot of depth and a nice flow, the good grammar is really the cherry on top of the cake. I'm looking forward to the rest eagerly. =)

really enjoying this so far(feels a bit more cynical than the game).
Luka's mom just died and I can't wait to see how this changes the main storyline.

Wow! Such a large chapter! And so so soon too! Appreciated. It was cool to seem some fallen angel stuff, and Liese not being Luka' biological mother is an interesting choice. I also see that Thermidor pick up some assistants. This'll change the dynamic even more. Certainly interesting.

I do have a question; will Luka follow the same attack route as the main game? Or will Thermidor train him to utilize his Fallen Angel Style attacks?

Hope to see more soon!

P.s. Shame that TVtropes has shut down their fanfic recs at the moment, but I was glad to see the hits double!

this story is a great au. at first i was unsure if this would turn out alright but by the third chapter i was hooked. Keep up the great work.

I'm curious as to how this will turn out. Granted, it is AU, but it's heavily implied that Luka's mother is an angel, since we know his father was a human, the ring, and the lady from Enrika was important enough to have a CG who knew his mother, while sharing the same artwork of Ilias. So I can't really see how you're going to implement that side of Luka, or even if you really are. With him training as a swordsman I guess he really wouldn't need to enter Lucifer mode to win any battles.

Monster Girl Quest had a story I wanted to play even without the porn, so it's good to see someone writing some fiction for it.

That being said, this story needs 100% moar Tamamo! *drool* ...and probably, maybe that other chick. What was her name? Alike or something... whatever...

Your eager fan, Anon.

Well, it's developing very slowly but it mostly a good read so I am enjoying it.
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