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Luka will get an ear full when he returns lol. Awesome chapter made me like the queen even more. I expect the men will be worshiping luka now lol.

I love this story! it is a great read. the story is funny and the sex is ok (Maybe a little over doen but then again it IS baised on a H-Game.)
btw you have probably been asked this a milion times alrady but...DO you know how to get a hold of a copy of this game? I have been looking but have had no success...i would love to know. Thanks for a great story

I've been reading this story for awhile now, and I gotta say it's great.

I haven't played the game this is based on, so I'm somewhat in the dark in places, but I like the characters, like the story, and the lemons are great(my favorite so far have been with the Elf twins & the Harpy Queen).

This latest chapter was one of the best in my opinion. I really liked the whole situation with the Harpy's taking the men for breeding. If at all possible, I'd really like to see a spin-off story about one of the men who got captured before Luka showed up, started a 2nd family with one of the them, then tell what happened after Luka resolved the situation, if you ever have the time and feel like doing that.

In any event, this is a great fic, and I'm certainly excited to see more.

Keep up the good work!

Man, read it from a start to end in one sitting! Great new characters! Lengthy chapters! Most of all, Cool! Competent! Luka! Whew. Had to get that out of my system. I'd love to read more of this, especially looking forward to Tamamo and her fluffy tails and fried tofu, or the duels with Granberia and also how Luka's going to deal with Erubetie... There's quite a lot I'm looking forward to so I'll just stop up to here. I reckon' this be THE best Monster Girl Quest fic out right now and hope we get to read the next chapter soon.

Haha. That's something else isn't it? Poor Luka. I can't help but feel that there'll be some legend of dozens of different monsters who look vaguely similar to each other cropping up in a few years. I wonder if genuine hero monster offspring have a higher chance of being born as a male with monster powers? Either way these kids are going to make the epilogue a whole lot more interesting.

Thanks for the massive chapter too!

This is probably the best Monster Girl fic out there right now, I'm happy to see the amount of media on the subject increasing :}
Luka is so out of character it's funny.

Looks like Alice is as demanding as ever. Still, I can't help but feel that you spend a little to much prose dealing with the Bandits. Sure they're important, but not THAT important.
I noticed you have given Luka the idea to retrace his steps. I must say that such things almost never happen in fiction, and is in itself a fairly interesting idea.

Personally I'm just glad you picked up the pen again. When I saw the author of this thing, I was like 'oh my god are the planets aligned?'

Maybe they are and I missed my chance to revive my dark god. Whatever this is still good.

Also seeing an AU written by an author I liked was the last straw for me. So I played the game. Thanks for that.

To be honest, I was wondering if Alice was going to use tentacle fingers at first since Luka wasn't whining about his goddess watching him fap. But then I suppose she's a high class lady who wouldn't give up the chance for extreme sexual tension by just giving up the goods right away.

...so I've got this image in my head of Alice and the heavenly knights fighting over Luka. Or at least Gran and Tamamo. Alma would be in it for the lulz and because of potential hawt dickings. Erubetie probably wouldn't want some Luka steak unless he created a golden age for slimes.

Anywho, I know I'm rambling here, so I'll break off by telling you that you're doing an awesome job, and by suggesting you try the NG+ sometime. I'll say it changes more then just Luka's ability.

Peace out mang.

Awesome as usual. The Granberria fight was different enough to be entertaining in it's own right, and Luka's first real monster fight went about as well as expected.
Feel kinda annoyed though. They took down the Monster Girl Quest page on TvTropes...
D:

very nice story. i hope will continue to write it.