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This is one of the best (if not THE best) fanfiction based on Monster Girl Quest I've ever read!
Twice I had the chance to read it, and I become totally hooked in with the story every time. If it had not the small details of of smut(let's face it, it would be hard for the story to NOT have what it has now), I feel that this could be one of the best-written and best-selling books in the world.
I hope you will still continue to write this fanfic until the very end, Genocide Heart. I've (somewhat) seen your work on fanfiction(.)net, and I find it a pity you didn't complete your other fanfics as a talent like yours is surprisingly sought out.

Again, I can't thanking you enough in making this somewhat AU fic of MSQ, and an enjoyable one at that! Please continue to do more! :D

Also, I found out that you have a few spelling error, but so few that I hardly noticed it the first time I read this fanfic. I'll be sure to point out the next time I find myself wanting to read it again. I also hope you update this fanfic soon! Can't wait for it! :D

By the way, it would be nice to know why you didn't post this on the other fanfic website? I might not be too aware of the problem, but it would be nice of you to tell. :P

Anyhow, cheers mate!

awesome chapter the 4 bandits made me turn to mush from the cuteness :) looks like luka is well set on the harem path XD

I really have to hand it to you, you've done a masterful job in giving your characters a layer of depth the original source material didn't have. I now cannot help but think that your Luka is far more compelling than the original has ever been. I also have to hand it to you for making every character meaningful in some sense, even as the cast list keeps ramping up in number. I especially appreciate your character interactions, as the personalities and emotions of everyone shine through in their dialogue and actions.

I look forward to every new chapter of this story, as it is a brilliant take that further expands an already interesting setting. Keep up the fantastic work!

Great story!
I hope that you continue with the proyect :D

Man, those four bandit chibis made me go d'awww... especially Viran and Serine. It might be awhile till be get to see them again, though probably not in Sawako's case since she has that delivery thing going and can traverse great distances that being some great goblins descendant and all (in-game). Same for Sophie and those eggs since it'd take four months or more... and those elf sisters, too!

I have to hand it to you, you really know how to give your characters more depth! Makes one invest into the characters one reads about, no? You also added another mystery, Thermidor's sword... and the spirit's presence kind of reminds him of Alice? Intriguing... I also imagine Thermidor's appearance turning in that of a Valkyrie-type angel if she uses the pent up divine energy, what with her being in armor already and it'd look great. Really loving your work that it makes me want to read the next chapter immediately after, spam F5 then just re-read it all. We'll all just have to endure till next update cause you don't fail in making it all worth the wait! Do it, Luka! Pick Tamamo's Fluffy Tails!

StI'll loving this story line. And still prefer your Luka to the cannon one. Any idea when MGQ 3 is supposed to be done?

Anyway. Love the humor you have laid and the hints about luka are just vauge enought to matter.
Little lamia crying... I would hate to be the cause of that as well.

Wow, this is very well done and thought out. Bravo good sir, bravo. I really want to see Luka's harpy kids when we get the chance to, I'm sure it will be a very emotional thing to read.

great story love it so far but in chapter 6 demon skull beheading is also a cursed sword skill and so why would Granberia be surprised that Luka knows when it would possible for Thermidor to have taught him

Ok so I bought the game (both parts) and I love it but as fun and entertaining as it is I think I prefer your story. Your take on the whole idea of the game is far more realistic and more interesting to watch unfold. I look foward to your next chapter!