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December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Quite impressed by this piece: I've heard about MGQ and while I have never played it, I feel that I really ought not now. Judging by everyone else, Luka here is quite a bit better than the original concept. Can't express enough the pleasure I have in seeing an actual story fleshed out here, it is quite a rarity to find one that is more than enthralling.
Your form and conventions in writing are top notch, especially considering the length of what you have here; nary a mistake to be observed, and nothing says good story like having to be reminded that there was even one typo in a whole chapter... My only less than glowing response to this (indeed) saga is that Luka has a bit of Mary Sue in him. Despite all the depth you have been very adept at filling him and even minor characters with! But I strongly suspect that any blithely Sue-ness is really the Fairy Tale part of this, and MGQ itself being the inspiration. I am truly impressed with the breadth and scale of your writing, thank you for making this.
Please do keep at it, as you most certainly have me hooked and it seems like you sincerely enjoy writing this.
Your form and conventions in writing are top notch, especially considering the length of what you have here; nary a mistake to be observed, and nothing says good story like having to be reminded that there was even one typo in a whole chapter... My only less than glowing response to this (indeed) saga is that Luka has a bit of Mary Sue in him. Despite all the depth you have been very adept at filling him and even minor characters with! But I strongly suspect that any blithely Sue-ness is really the Fairy Tale part of this, and MGQ itself being the inspiration. I am truly impressed with the breadth and scale of your writing, thank you for making this.
Please do keep at it, as you most certainly have me hooked and it seems like you sincerely enjoy writing this.
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December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've read chapter ten about three times now! I'm really pumped for the next chapter already! Specifically, Luka and Tamamo's interaction! Although I know it's going to be quite awhile till next chapter, it's fine since I know it's going to be worth the wait! I'm still kind of hoping you'd grace us with another update before MGQ 3 get's released though, haha!
P.S: Thanks for replying to my queries in Rouge's site. This is Sav-kun logging out!
P.S: Thanks for replying to my queries in Rouge's site. This is Sav-kun logging out!
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December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE NEW CHAPTER, GH!! XD Also, please send my thanks to those that helped you too! :D
After reading it(plus reacting to all the right places, like laughing my butt off during some parts), it made me want to read the whole fiction once again! ON MY MOBILE PHONE, NO LESS!! XD (Writing this post on it too. Maybe a bit too long for my taste.) And to my surprise yet again, it felt like I was reading it for the first time! :D I won't be more surprised if this happens every time I do it! I find it even more funny, and at sad situations make me feel all the same. You did an excellent at making this fanfic!
While re-reading, I found out that you did have a typo! (FINALLY! A rarity of the situation! XD) Though, not from your new chapter. It was the mistake I mentioned a while back. It was where Luka explained to Alice that "Tyris(?)" gave him the stolen red gem; you typed 'game' instead of 'gave'. In chapter 5 or 6, if I am not mistaken. (Sorry if I misspelled Dragon Girl's name. It would take some time to check it again, and I am too tired for that.)
Also, when I mentioned "the other fanfic site", I meant fanfiction(.)net. I mean, you had other stories there, so why continue there(as well as your other stories)? Sorry to pry, but I am not aware of any sort of situations in such sites, like deletion of M-rated fiction by moderators and such. I am only a passing-by reader, but whenever I find an excellent fanfic, I would comment on it; eventhough only through guest posts. Yours here is one of the exceptions. XP
Also, I'm answering your email to me here as I didn't have the convinience at the time and totally forgot about it until today! XD Would it be okay to reply to you there? I don't usually get replies from my comments and it feels awkward for me. Hehe...
Anyway, all the best for the next chapter. Can't wait!! XD
Cheers.
After reading it(plus reacting to all the right places, like laughing my butt off during some parts), it made me want to read the whole fiction once again! ON MY MOBILE PHONE, NO LESS!! XD (Writing this post on it too. Maybe a bit too long for my taste.) And to my surprise yet again, it felt like I was reading it for the first time! :D I won't be more surprised if this happens every time I do it! I find it even more funny, and at sad situations make me feel all the same. You did an excellent at making this fanfic!
While re-reading, I found out that you did have a typo! (FINALLY! A rarity of the situation! XD) Though, not from your new chapter. It was the mistake I mentioned a while back. It was where Luka explained to Alice that "Tyris(?)" gave him the stolen red gem; you typed 'game' instead of 'gave'. In chapter 5 or 6, if I am not mistaken. (Sorry if I misspelled Dragon Girl's name. It would take some time to check it again, and I am too tired for that.)
Also, when I mentioned "the other fanfic site", I meant fanfiction(.)net. I mean, you had other stories there, so why continue there(as well as your other stories)? Sorry to pry, but I am not aware of any sort of situations in such sites, like deletion of M-rated fiction by moderators and such. I am only a passing-by reader, but whenever I find an excellent fanfic, I would comment on it; eventhough only through guest posts. Yours here is one of the exceptions. XP
Also, I'm answering your email to me here as I didn't have the convinience at the time and totally forgot about it until today! XD Would it be okay to reply to you there? I don't usually get replies from my comments and it feels awkward for me. Hehe...
Anyway, all the best for the next chapter. Can't wait!! XD
Cheers.
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December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.
Well... there's only one thing left to do.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4nyHPIcbn88&list=UUb0R-W7KDn4ZrY3uGrP4Acg&index=8&feature=plcp
TOUCH. FLUFFY. TAIL.
Well... there's only one thing left to do.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4nyHPIcbn88&list=UUb0R-W7KDn4ZrY3uGrP4Acg&index=8&feature=plcp
TOUCH. FLUFFY. TAIL.
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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Finally the truth comes out, or at least starts too. Another monster of a chapter that took me a few sittings to finish. Nice work, and thanks for your dedication.
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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, comprehensive length and nary a single spelling error throughout. You have my sincerest admiration. All I can possibly say is keep up the good work!
Sabr
Sabr
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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!. Took me awhile to read but well worth the time. Hope you update this soon and keep up the great work.
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November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story
Like you have already been told this is the best MGQ I have read
Exelent writing and much more interesting than the game
The Luka of the game should be more like yours
Like you have already been told this is the best MGQ I have read
Exelent writing and much more interesting than the game
The Luka of the game should be more like yours
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh come now, you can't leave us hanging at the end of a chapter like that! Yet another excellent chapter, I am looking forward to the next one!
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well lookie-lookie who it is...