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for Monster Girl Saga

by GenocideHeart

schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished my 3rd read through, looking forward to more. Hope to see a new chapter soon? you used to update once a month...what happened?
person JD
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let this end up on a shell and end up not being finished! I love this version of the story and I want to see more of it done!
person Twig
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
And now I shall motivate you, through the power of memes!

Mah Boi, this story is what all true bibliophiles strive for! You must compose additional chapters. Pingas!

That is all.
person Vincent
schedule March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that this story won't be abandoned like many other good works of fanfiction out there. This is quite literally the only fanfiction that MGQ has and it'd be a horrid waste for it to just be chucked aside. Especially when this looks like it'd end up better than the original game, not that the story in the original game was all that bad in the first place.


Hope to see this updated soon!
person DroppedMuffin
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You know, I am still waiting for another dream from Ilias and for that slime to pop up.
person DroppedMuffin
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ha, here is the one thing that would fuck them over so many times from now on, thin walls.

I don't think this will be the last inn scene, and most of them have rooms pretty close back in the 1300s-1400s
person DroppedMuffin
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You did something that I must commend, you had the innkeeper look out the window to tell the time. It is amazing how many people put watches in stories where they cannot exist yet, or can only be owned by the insanely rich. And the ones that don't mention using the sun to tell time simply use "I'd better get going, the (laundry/food)'s done"
person DroppedMuffin
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aside from the bit with bats, Vampys scene was completely adorable.

*nibble*
person DroppedMuffin
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I understand that that was necessary. Don't do it again, Luka started acting strange the moment he saw a harpy and it never went back to normal.

Also, the humans reactions were way too calm and logical. Really, two women cared.
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!