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January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
a seemingly great take on the MGQ story, ruined with tons of shitty OCs. Time to look elsewhere
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January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. The highest praise i can give: 1. I actually like this story more than the source material. 2. If this was a physical book I would pay money for it.
Couple of requests, there better be hot marathon Farewell sex with Luka and Thermidor before she goes solo. Also, don't know if you have an idea on the ending, but I think Luka, being all OP at the end, should have short little epilogue chapters with all his partners one on one where he just lays them down and goes all Alpha on them, making them go sensory overload instead. would be an interesting dynamic switch and also a way to show his long development of his skills and power. Just a thought, I eagerly await more!
Couple of requests, there better be hot marathon Farewell sex with Luka and Thermidor before she goes solo. Also, don't know if you have an idea on the ending, but I think Luka, being all OP at the end, should have short little epilogue chapters with all his partners one on one where he just lays them down and goes all Alpha on them, making them go sensory overload instead. would be an interesting dynamic switch and also a way to show his long development of his skills and power. Just a thought, I eagerly await more!
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September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work, eagerly anticipateing more.
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August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and can't wait for when you get enough time to continue it.
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July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope that your still continuing this story since this was amazing when I first found it and I didn't even bother stop reading it until I got up to your most recent updates...so please continue this as I want to see more of this glory that you putting together
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May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great job. Massive as expected.
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May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. Just...wow. This story is really freaking good. Keep up the good work man! Dammit, why doesn't this site have an story update alert system...
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. To be honest, I was starting to get scared that this was going to deadfic. Which would've been an epic bummer.
So, one thing that keeps itching at the back of my mind... Luka is now a competent lover instead of a bumbling virgin. His attitude is also good about actual sex, so...
I'm wondering if somewhere down the line, he'd offer to please Alice sexually? I get that she's eating and probably enjoying it quite a lot, but I'm pretty sure Luka definitely wouldn't hesitate to ask to return the favor at some point. Even if it didn't come to actual penetration, because of a few other things we know about Alice, I imagine there's plenty of ways they could entertain eachother. Personally, one of the most satisfying things to me is if the girl's enjoying themselves, and given how thoughtful Luka appears to be, I can't imagine he'd be that much different. Especially given how hard he tried to please Sophie.
Aaaaaand that's my two cents. Sorry if you were already planning on addressing this.
Also this chapter was awesome! Keep up the good work man!
So, one thing that keeps itching at the back of my mind... Luka is now a competent lover instead of a bumbling virgin. His attitude is also good about actual sex, so...
I'm wondering if somewhere down the line, he'd offer to please Alice sexually? I get that she's eating and probably enjoying it quite a lot, but I'm pretty sure Luka definitely wouldn't hesitate to ask to return the favor at some point. Even if it didn't come to actual penetration, because of a few other things we know about Alice, I imagine there's plenty of ways they could entertain eachother. Personally, one of the most satisfying things to me is if the girl's enjoying themselves, and given how thoughtful Luka appears to be, I can't imagine he'd be that much different. Especially given how hard he tried to please Sophie.
Aaaaaand that's my two cents. Sorry if you were already planning on addressing this.
Also this chapter was awesome! Keep up the good work man!
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May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good news! Chapter 11 is out, and will be hitting here soon! Or you could go to http://monstergirlunlimited.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=812&hilit=Monster+Girl+Saga&start=500 and view it now. Also message from the author quoted from
http://roguetranslations.wordpress.com/2013/05/23/mgq3-official-release-date/
"Chapter 11 of Monster Girl Saga has been fully proofread, and is now available on Monstergirl Unlimited and The Fanfiction Forum. I will wait to see if the people there spot any typos, then upload it on AFF, make part of my Google folder public and link to the folder so people can go ahead and see all the chapters in one convenient location.
Those of you who have access to the two forums, have fun! And do let me know if you like, either here or (preferably) on the forums. I know it can be inconvenient to sign up, but it’s free, and it’d make it much easier to contact me. I’ll still check here for as long as this blog lives, though."
Since I have checked here daily, and these "reviews" seem to be the easiest way to post on the chapters, thought I'd pass on the message. WOOO Chap 11!
http://roguetranslations.wordpress.com/2013/05/23/mgq3-official-release-date/
"Chapter 11 of Monster Girl Saga has been fully proofread, and is now available on Monstergirl Unlimited and The Fanfiction Forum. I will wait to see if the people there spot any typos, then upload it on AFF, make part of my Google folder public and link to the folder so people can go ahead and see all the chapters in one convenient location.
Those of you who have access to the two forums, have fun! And do let me know if you like, either here or (preferably) on the forums. I know it can be inconvenient to sign up, but it’s free, and it’d make it much easier to contact me. I’ll still check here for as long as this blog lives, though."
Since I have checked here daily, and these "reviews" seem to be the easiest way to post on the chapters, thought I'd pass on the message. WOOO Chap 11!
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just now got into the MGQ series. And was going to write a story that basically stole your idea. I didn't mean to come up with the same idea of Luka having a monster companion to train him from youth. So, I apologize that we had the same idea. But, since you had it first, I have a request. Can I write a one shot chapter based off your story that is a fanfiction of your fanfiction? I was very inspired by the idea of the four bandits promising to be the brides of Luka. And how Theramdor mentioned that monsters mature faster than humans. So, my thought was Alice transports Luka two months after his children had hatched back to Ilias. But, they accidentally transported in the middle of Po's craft shed. There is Tyris in the middle of changing into a more appealing brassiere. When she notices him and he notices her suddenly developing. What he didn't know was that the previous week was the week of the purple moon, which not only makes some women into succubi. But, also give a giant growth spurt to several monsters across the world. Oh, and do you mind if I add two new harpies, visiting harpies from their own harpy villages on the main continent? The phoenix and Thunderbird harpies? Maybe to settle a possible harpy war, Sophie uses her husband's point of view of no war is good war to settle their differences?