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August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It has returned!
I thought this story was dead, which would have been a shame, because it's fantastic and original.
Can we get a warning before super-long hiatuses?
Keep writing, I'm hyped as hell!
I thought this story was dead, which would have been a shame, because it's fantastic and original.
Can we get a warning before super-long hiatuses?
Keep writing, I'm hyped as hell!
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July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just had a jolt of memory and remembered this story! So very nostalgic. And the quality is as good as I remember.
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April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Is there a way to get updates on this story?
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November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've reread this fanfiction over and over and over, and I still find it as amazing as the very first time that I read it! I can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm sure it will be just as good! :)
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July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing such an awesome story. I have just re-started MGQ since the 3rd part is done and found this because of Familiar of the Void, Knight of the Void or whatever it was on ff.net. I never expected to find actual quality fanfiction of an eroge game, although considering how good the story of MGQ is I suppose it is an exception to the norm of the genre. Please continue this, and I can't wait to see what comes next. Your changes are great, because while they change the story dramatically, they are all a direct result of Thermidor, rather than simply changing the main character without any shown reason (a mistake many fanfic authors mistake) and seeing how those changes affect the MGQ world is a good way to give this world a fresh taste. Excellent work, I'm looking forward to this fic being completed, though it's obviously quite a ways away from that.
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping this story wouldn't die, but it seems it has
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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Surprised liese died in this since you gave her monster heritage and made her extremely sexually frustrated. Her monster blood would allow her to heal somewhat from semen and Luka is an incredibly large and virile source of it. She also displayed attraction to his body his first time and in your fic they share no blood relation. She excused his experiences with Ther who, for all intents and purposes, is his stepsister, so why would she have issue with Luka sleeping with her, his stepmother? Especially ince she knows what her death would do to him, considering she called Ther out on it.
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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ch5
You forgot to mention Alice's skirt she wears even in monster form.
Oh yeah, while it looks like you are going in this direction anyway it will still make the request: PLEASE MAKE IT A LUKAHAREM! FTW!
How would Wriph know how her sister’s pussy feels on a penis?
I thought you said the Twins saw no reason to break men: if that is the case then why does Milia like doing so? If they are brought to the edge of insanity that would usually mean they are left broken instead.
I was expecting Luka to take charge so to speak but I was expecting him to come to that conclusion himself when I started reading the lemon considering Luka claimed to be going along with his primal instincts but only a little ways down he goes back to being submissive...I also find it strange that he never played with either twin's breasts considering his fascination of them throughout your fic. For a boob’s man the fact he didn't pay attention to them is strange...
The gerbil comparison was funny
...surprising considering their father would have been "human" and thus an Illias follower...always possible such men could be raped but the odds of the combination...then again fanon.
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TFF? What does that refer to?
How does she have no choice when she can remove it?
If memory serves Demon Decapitation was an abbreviated name for it. I remember a few of them had relatively long names. It was humorous for some of them. Cannot remember them but now I am curious. I have part 1 and 2 on my port hard drive while I have a fusion download of 1 and 2 on my new PC and part 3 which I just downloaded...haven't played it yet and I will have to fuse them all together and start from scratch...eventually. I want to win part 3 first.
Might I suggest Luka saying "So I'm (or "I am") doing it, IN HER STEAD."? (Not sure if the comma is needed or not. it feels like it would be but that also looks like a prepositional phrase, I believe that is what they are called, and they do not have commas.)
I would not describe her skin tone as pink...I believe it was pretty pale.
What object did Granberia pick up?
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DMC4 Gilgamesh? Gabriel? I am curious on the origins of those two comments.
Po? Name origin or was it one you came up with?
If it was her right hand than she should hold it to the left so she could pull the hammer with her right arm. From the right side it’s her left arm that is doing the most work.
Was the Goblin Girl named in canon?
Does vampire training mean sex or blood drinking? lol
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Just don't MAKE money off them
It’s funny how much faster she got at hypnosis in game when it came to conning people lol. I thought it was humorous in canon as well.
Producing herself in a big smile...I am positive that needs to be rewritten but I am unsure how to go about it.
but back HERE it was
Considering they are monsters they would make an effective weapon
Wouldn’t the Harpies have some male human children with Harpy blood on occasion? the fact that the Elf Twins in your fic have succubus blood and the Sabasa King in canon is of monster blood means they can have male children...they just end up being human with their monster blood lying dormant unless/until certain conditions are met.
You forgot to mention Alice's skirt she wears even in monster form.
Oh yeah, while it looks like you are going in this direction anyway it will still make the request: PLEASE MAKE IT A LUKAHAREM! FTW!
How would Wriph know how her sister’s pussy feels on a penis?
I thought you said the Twins saw no reason to break men: if that is the case then why does Milia like doing so? If they are brought to the edge of insanity that would usually mean they are left broken instead.
I was expecting Luka to take charge so to speak but I was expecting him to come to that conclusion himself when I started reading the lemon considering Luka claimed to be going along with his primal instincts but only a little ways down he goes back to being submissive...I also find it strange that he never played with either twin's breasts considering his fascination of them throughout your fic. For a boob’s man the fact he didn't pay attention to them is strange...
The gerbil comparison was funny
...surprising considering their father would have been "human" and thus an Illias follower...always possible such men could be raped but the odds of the combination...then again fanon.
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TFF? What does that refer to?
How does she have no choice when she can remove it?
If memory serves Demon Decapitation was an abbreviated name for it. I remember a few of them had relatively long names. It was humorous for some of them. Cannot remember them but now I am curious. I have part 1 and 2 on my port hard drive while I have a fusion download of 1 and 2 on my new PC and part 3 which I just downloaded...haven't played it yet and I will have to fuse them all together and start from scratch...eventually. I want to win part 3 first.
Might I suggest Luka saying "So I'm (or "I am") doing it, IN HER STEAD."? (Not sure if the comma is needed or not. it feels like it would be but that also looks like a prepositional phrase, I believe that is what they are called, and they do not have commas.)
I would not describe her skin tone as pink...I believe it was pretty pale.
What object did Granberia pick up?
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DMC4 Gilgamesh? Gabriel? I am curious on the origins of those two comments.
Po? Name origin or was it one you came up with?
If it was her right hand than she should hold it to the left so she could pull the hammer with her right arm. From the right side it’s her left arm that is doing the most work.
Was the Goblin Girl named in canon?
Does vampire training mean sex or blood drinking? lol
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Just don't MAKE money off them
It’s funny how much faster she got at hypnosis in game when it came to conning people lol. I thought it was humorous in canon as well.
Producing herself in a big smile...I am positive that needs to be rewritten but I am unsure how to go about it.
but back HERE it was
Considering they are monsters they would make an effective weapon
Wouldn’t the Harpies have some male human children with Harpy blood on occasion? the fact that the Elf Twins in your fic have succubus blood and the Sabasa King in canon is of monster blood means they can have male children...they just end up being human with their monster blood lying dormant unless/until certain conditions are met.
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March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I finished Monmusu Quest 3 a few days ago and was starving for some good fanfiction for it. I love what you've done to change the story so far and I'm sure I'll love what you do in the future.
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January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see the story has picked back up! It is a really good one, with it staying so close to the game but being so much better. I was always kinda pissed that Luka was such a pussy in the game.