First off I must commend you for all that you’ve done so far. I stumbled across this one just looking for stories relating to monster girl quest. Immediately after finishing the first chapter I marathon every single written one so far. There are just so many things I could commend you on but I’ll just say you’ve created a magnificent world with characters, description and more. I understand that real life can interfere in many ways with writing. But I want to tell you that despite me literally somebody across the story by accident it is the reason I created an account so I could express all that I feel about the story Rick. If you ever end up seeing this please continue writing even if it is in the story you’ve got a great talent for it. And good luck and if you ever wanna reach out to me I think my email is attached to the profile. Sorry I rambled on enough uu
The main question I have, somewhat dependent on when this got started, is whether the Mother is divergent from Canon. If not, I wonder why Lucifina is using a false (or even a shortened verison) name.
If this was written PRIOR to the release of part 3, it is understandable, since the writer would not have known about Luka's Angel heritage.
By far one of if not the best story's I have read on this site!
I would love to read so much more that I can't stand it xD.
If the authur would like to have much greater reader feed back I highly recommend posting this story on RoyalRoadLegend's, it is a very good site for authur's to post the work's on with many writer's group's to help with proof reading, idea sharing,etc.
There is also a most read list for people to see and I have no doubt when I say you will soar to the very top very quickly!!
It is my very sincear hope that I can read more of this story very soon!!
Damn, this was the best one too
You really are crafting a living world her, and I can't wait to see when happens between the Mermaid General and Alice.
Thanks for your hard work!