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June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! =) I wish FemShep would have been able to romance James Vega, he's an available sexy hunk going to waste by not getting laid ;D But I think this should have been the ME3 ending...weeellll maybe without all the sex scenes lol
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April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is great work! I check in nearly everyday to see if there's a new chapter. I'm a big fan of James Vega and I really wish he'd been a romancable option in Mass Effect 3. You've captured his character very well, and I love that he and Shepard have a very caring relationship, as well as a very steamy one. Please keep writing because I'll keep reading!
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April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just spent the last 4 hours on my cell phone reading this story. that should tell you how amazing the story is. you captured Shepard and Vega's personalities perfectly as well as the rest of the normandy's crew. excellent story, i give you a 10 for this one.
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April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just got all caught up to the end of chapter 5. You're doing a real good job of developing a relationship for them beyond the sexual aspect.
I think i liked the start of the 'say my name' chapter the best. I especially admire the way that shep/vega are taking the lead at different times so its not just 'commanding commader shep is control all the time' OR 'big tuff shep is a submissive sex kitten when you get here on her back'
Keep up the good work.
I think i liked the start of the 'say my name' chapter the best. I especially admire the way that shep/vega are taking the lead at different times so its not just 'commanding commader shep is control all the time' OR 'big tuff shep is a submissive sex kitten when you get here on her back'
Keep up the good work.
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March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OK, I've read the first chapter not played any Mass Effect games. But het fic is a rare commodity I did it anyway :P
That was a pretty solid start. I quite like your characterisation of Vega and the dialogue. If I had to nitpick, you randomly changed point of view to Shepard for one paragraph when at all other times you'd been in Vega's. And the actual intercourse section was very briefly described compared to the foreplay.
Still a good fic.
That was a pretty solid start. I quite like your characterisation of Vega and the dialogue. If I had to nitpick, you randomly changed point of view to Shepard for one paragraph when at all other times you'd been in Vega's. And the actual intercourse section was very briefly described compared to the foreplay.
Still a good fic.