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13 was, not so great. Looking forward to the next chap.
SailorNemesis

another great chapter, and as for my vote on the next fight i say Skarlet, see ya next chapter

Kind of disappointed in Jade's victory celebration with Skarlet. Hope she finds the pill and has some fun. My vote is doesn't matter. Both are crazy sexual so should be a good one.

What a sexy chapter...loved it. :) my vote is Mileena cause well...I love me some Mileena lol. So yup my vote is Mileena. Can't wait till the next chap.

Decent chap. The loser are fighting each other next? This is gonna take forever and I want to get to the ending. I hope you have the motivation to finish. We are voting for Kitana's opponent? Who are the options?
SailorNemesis

Another great chapter. My vote for the next match is Mileena, so that there can possibly be a Kitana/Mileena match up. I still cast my vote for the overall winner to be Sonya. She's the most likable of the sluts and she wants to be the mother of Sheeva's children more than the rest.

Still great story. There are several other female characters, though that's neither here nor there. I vote for craziness and Mileena.

Love your story, I wish for more please. :)

I am really liking this story so far.

Honestly, I see Skarlett as winning this one. Considering how she is when absorbing sexual fluids, Jade doesn't really stand a chance-besides, I've a feeling Jade would only half-ass it. It's clear she'd rather not participate.

Also, I'd like some more interaction between the other women in the harem, like during some down time or maybe during a meal. It doesn't have to be sexual (though I won't complain if it is), but the story is called 'sheeva's sluts', so there should be more chapters with them interacting with eachother: like Kitana and Jade on their own, or Sonya and Mileena.