rate_review Reviews

Very well detailed and told. I'd like to see Sheeva do a guy but I understand if it's not your thing or that you couldn't honestly think of a male MK character that would work well with it.

Love the concept. Looking forward to Sonya taking a hard pounding.
SailorNemesis

its well written.......i just wish it hadnt been herm, i woudl have loved this story...but its great if ur in2 dickchicks at least

Interesting story though I have to wonder have you thought about having one of the male characters (Maybe Johnny Cage) act as a kind of Ambassador but ends up as one of Sheeva's Sluts(Futa on male is Awesome) who then acts as her spy for the rest of Earth Realm. I suggested Johnny as in the main game He had fought not all of the speices of Outworld (Reptile, Baraka, Sheeva's guards, and Motaro) and you could also mention that he has the Potential to be a huge ally which might earn him some respect from her as a warrior while also earning her loathing from some of her people a even trade considering the true potential of his destructive capability.