rate_review Reviews

I like this story, this kind of bondage is my thing, but story wise I think it's waaay too long. They tried to broke her 3 times in one story and most chapters just showing her completley passive in slightly different surroundings.So great story kink wise, but I think 40+ chapters with the same theme a little bit too much.

Hey that last chapter (40) was good!

This is such bullshit, what's happened to Samus. Plain and simple. It's not hot, it's cruel. Depressing. UGLY. 

I love it, Cant wait for more chapters where Samus get abused even more. Keep it up.

These feminist man haters must be new to this site. I mean, they come on to a website that features stories of women getting raped by monsters or roasted alive by cannibal tribes, and they complain about a fictional female character they worship being sexualized? Those man hating feminists need to cream themselves over yaoi and shut their whiny hypocritical mouths. I mean, Samus is not a real person. SAMUS IS FICTIONAL.

And even if Samus was real, she would want nothing to do with a bunch of bra burning fag hag man haters anyways. She has better things to do than burn bras and whine about how men suck.

Sorry, I just had to get this out.

Oh come on, really ? We're back to this ? Did you change your mind since the answer you gave to my review on Hentai Foundry ? Because if this is the same kind of slave collar then I have to warn you that your readers SOD, including mine, won't take it well if Samus manage to free herself at this point. You've been doing TOO GOOD a job of breaking her for recovery to even look possible at this point.

As a side note, you should really get around to updating the HF version of this story. AFF's interface is really clunky and annoying.

Honestly, I'm surprised Samus hasn't broken physically yet, let alone emotionally/mentally. You're doing some cruel things to that woman's body and I don't see an end in sight. Is this a story where the hero ultimately loses? It's difficult to see any other outcome at this point. The rug is always being pulled from underneath Samus' feet. With each chapter there's the resigned feeling as a reader.

I'm sure there's an argument that this torture, of both character and audience, has been overly prolonged. It can be really tiring to see Samus fail over and over and over again. I suppose in that regard the reader can certainly empathise with her situation, if that was your intent. I can only assume you know what you're doing though, judging by your commentary, so even though I'm frustrated by the present turn of events I'll be keeping an eye on this.

This is incredibly misogynistic towards a kick ass female character. It's insulting towards the original source material, it's essentially torture porn, and the motivations of the villains make absolutely no good sense. How would you feel if somebody else took characters that you personally created and had them tortured? This is a spit in the face of Samus. It's been nothing but 30 chapters of pissing all over her and putting her through the ringer for no good reason at all. What are you trying to show? That your villains are fucked up? We already got that!

Ugh. Getting frustrated by this up and down ride. Damnit give Samus a break, will ya? Am/am not looking forward to what happens next.

Still awaiting an update to this excellent fic. It seems as though Lara has seen the worst (Ridley's torture). I wonder if you're going to up the ante somehow or maybe focus on undoing the psychological indoctrination now, or keep it around as a lingering aftereffect. Would love to hear from you in the forums in any case.

Cheers.