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by Asidian

schedule September 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was the first time a smut fiction made me actually sad. I kept rereading the lines about Akane, especially the part about the stairs, her body, the memory of her laughter.. amazing.

Somehow your characters continue to feel like themselves - a trait most fanfiction writers do not possess.

Thank you for the beautiful read.