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for Sucked In

by HarmonizedAnimus

person Anon
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really nice, and nicely paced. Though Quill seems a little...well, I'm just going to say that by turning down Alaya, I feel that he became a little better and a little worse as a character.

Still, love where this is going, and I like how you're developing this. Nice to see something that's not just a self-insert gary stu.
person heketor7
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. The chapters are smaller than i would have liked but then that's probably because i wanted to read more. I like pacing for the relationship between Quill(sp?) and the hunter, especially with the smut