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for Rule 39

by grimreaperchibi

person steven
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very good story cant wait to find out what happens (bit graphic though)
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see Razer relaxing a little bit more. Even if he didn't plan on doing it. Phoenix seems to be doing him more good than either of them realize yet.

Aside from all that, though. That was quite a show indeed. I feel like I need to be shoving large bills into Razer's thong, here. Man's got talent, even if (again) he didn't plan on showing it off. Looking forward to the next installment, as always!
person Franko
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HOTT.

'nuff said.
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll just be over here, squeeing with glee.
person truthasfarasitgoes
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Moar pleez?! With sugar and syrup and honey and small furry animals (which would be a sticky mess, *evil chuckle*) on top?

Seriously, I am intrigued by the story line and can't wait to see where you are going to take it. And, I am thoroughly enjoying your deft characterization!
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
... yeah. I'm done feeling sorry for Razer. Now I want to watch him get his ass kicked. They certainly do have a bumpy road before them, don't they? Ah, well. It'll be worth it when they get their acts together. In the meantime, I can enjoy watching Razer squirm like a caterpillar without his nicotine.
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, this looks like it's going very messy very fast - and I can't wait~*hearts* go Phoenix go! Just pin Razer down and fuck him silly - everything will work out after that.
person Mari
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this. This whole AU arc, is just so delicious, for some reason, and it being in the hands of two awesome writers is probably part of the reason!

Anyway, I was hoping we'd get a little more in terms of the Razer/Phoenix relationship, so I'm glad you and Robin decided to do it like this...No Pairing Left Behind! :D

Loving poor Razer's dilemma, can't wait for him to be further tortured, lol. And in case I haven't reviewed your work before, I say now that I"m a big fan of your works! :D
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I feel bad for Razer even when I'm a co-conspirator in his current misery...?

Again, and again and again, I'm so happy that you decided to write this. I will support you messing with these guys for as long as you possibly want to, and probably beyond that. Thoughts of the next chapter make me drool like a corgi with a ham hock. Looking forward to it, and to a long and productive stint in this AU-verse. Cheers!
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ALL OF MY GLEE.