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Razer's scars getting slowly healed by Phoenix's innocent love, frightening the former because he's lived so long with them he can't remember life without them, thus driving him toward drastic action. This will either end with Razer healed or him holding a bloody knife over someone's body... the suspense is almost as delicious as the debauchery. Keep up the good work!

Oh wow, this was hot and chilling all at the same time. Excellent work! I still have goose bumps.

i have so many feels and words right now, so i'm just put it out there now

Razer better have had the worst possible stereotypical eastern-European upbraiding ever, complete with his parents forcing him to fight the wolves for food and having to put down his siblings because they were sick/injured for some reason; Because If this Me vs. the world, aromantic, control-freak, emotional stunted angstyness is just because he doesn't want to accept that he's human (or because he is a rather extreme case of asperger's) than i am going to lose so much respect for his character. seriously, i wanted to hit him with a chair about three times.

But yeah i'll get off my lumping soapbox now, glob.
I hope more chapters of this comes out, b/c cheers to you for being one of the few fanfic authors that made me have such powerful feels.

Okay, so I'm a horrible person. I've been reading Room and Board and Rule 39 for a little while now and I love both, but haven't left any reviews yet because I wasn't sure what to say, other than awesome! (I know, two different authors, but I can't quite mention one without the other.) And of course 50 Shades of Grey got a lot of stuff wrong. I don't even need to read it to know that. If it's riding on Twilight's coat-tails, well... Actually, the fact that it is as popular as it is, because it's Twilight-level bad, worries me, honestly. I know to each their own but WTF people? Why do so many readers have no taste? I understand guilty pleasures, but so much popularity means that some people must love it because they just don't read much else. :P

Ahem! Anyway, to the reviewer HORSEBIRD, I believe the scars insinuate that Razer was attacked with a knife and a gun for being homosexual. Either at the same time or two different occasions. Plus, his upbringing was apparently very strict and it's hard to shake anything ingrained at a young age by parents and other family or community. It's absolutely possible, but it isn't easy and some people can never get over it, even with all the love and compassion in the world at their side. I'm pretty certain that Razer has had a rough life, which doesn't need to be as melodramatic as killing your own siblings to be sympathetic. (I know, that was hyperbole, but you know what I mean.)

I am still very curious who gave that expensive cologne to Razer, though. If we never find out, I'm assuming it's from G.T. Blitz, because I can. Mwahahaha!

As for the story itself, I'm loving Rule 39 a lot. I love Room and Board too, the slow build-up and WAFF is great, but I love how things quickly get to the point with Razer and Phoenix, yet that doesn't necessarily solve anything. I'm definitely enjoying their relationship and I have so many squees ready for when love confessions come. Even if it never comes to that point, I have all those squees ready. Hah hah! I came for the sex and stayed for the WAFF? I don't even know, but keep it comin'! I love this pairing. :3

Oh, and I'm a dummy. I forgot to mention that the sex has been amazing! You write it so well; it's all in the little details, which are overall quite realistic, and you make it so hot! I'm loving all the kinky fun they've been having. Keep it comin'!

I will apologize for distracting you with HammerTime. It's like crack. Crack with adorkable boys.

But yes. I really like this chapter, not just for the exquisite hotness (and oh goodness, is it!) but for the emotional over and undertones here. It's great to see Razer and Phoenix probing a little deeper into their relationship (*snerk* I said probing oh em gee how old am I really) and to see Razer expressing some of his deeply repressed feels, even if that expression isn't totally positive. I look forward to the day when he can finally let go of some of that "poison" as he calls it and be himself. Phoenix has his work cut out for him, I know, but we've known it from the beginning and we still believe in our adorable Aussie.

Don't worry, boys. It can only get better from here. Every mushroom cloud has a silver lining, and all that!

Yay!!! I'm so glad you finally updated. I got really interested in this story and Robins 'Room and Board'. I hope you continue to write more because this has become my favorite pairing besides Jak and Daxter.

You. Made. Me. Like, Rayn.

I'm not sure if I can forgive you for that.

Phoenix's Aussie slang is adorable and needs to happen more.

And Razer. Oh my GOD, Razer. I wanted to wrap him up in a hug and snuggle him. Goodness, honey, those words are going to bite you in the ass and I foresee bad things in your future, dearheart. bad bad things.

However, I still look forward to reading them, because I'm a terrible person like that. XD

Brilliant chapter, as always.

In this case, expedited shipping is definitely worth it, Phoenix. Definitely.

I think I enjoy this chapter a little more every time I read it. Tying someone to a bed may be a little bit... extreme, but obviously it had to be done. Razer left his roomie no choice in the matter and, after all, Phoenix is so resourceful. And now with any luck Razer will sit down and just watch the damn movie without making a fuss. His blood pressure will thank him for taking the break.

Really loving the pacing you're putting the boys through. It's working very well. Keep it up; you are the good neko, best writer!

Hnnnnnngh.