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Aww, I think it's nice to see Razer be domestic for a change. And good to see that he can have a good relationship with someone that isn't based on sex. Hopefully Zelda will warm up to Phoenix in time, even though it's totally understandable that she would be a little aloof around someone threatening to take her dear brother's attention! Who wouldn't want to keep a brother willing to do donuts with them in his car all to themselves? Don't worry about the length; it flows just fine. I hope to see more sibling cuteness and maybe an olive branch between Zel and Phoenix next time!

Is it very bad that in the beginning, I totally pictured Rayn as Navi? Fluttering around Razer and whining, going "LISTEN!" Because I did.

Thank you so much for writing about these two huge dweebuses being adorable boyfriends. (Even if they're still not technically boyfriends because all the men in their hall are emotionally stunted apparently.) The dancing was simply the cutest thing. Even Razer getting riled up enough to get it on in the corner of a very public building was cute, just because Phoenix meant to get him riled up. He's such a tease, that one. Almost rivals Jak for the title.

This chapter definitely fulfilled my happy thoughts quota for the day. You're doing a marvelous job helping Phoenix defrost the Ice King. Can't wait for winter break shenanigans! Keep up the excellent work, my friend.

Okay. I have to say. You've really outdone yourself this time.

I've been looking forward to this chapter for a long time, and you really delivered. The racing scene was everything it needed to be and more. Phoenix's amazement, Rayn's involvement, Razer's team and their dialogue all together -- perfect. I love how you've built up Razer and Phoenix's sphere of the college world. It fits them so well, and the tantalizing little tidbits of backstory we keep getting are more than enough to tease me along and keep foaming at the mouth for another until Razer is finally ready to tell all.

And, of course, the sex is phenomenal in this chapter. I'm both jealous of those boys and saying "Damn, now I know why they're in such a great mood at Thanksgiving dinner..."

Keep up the excellent work, my friend! Know that I appreciate how hard you work on this fic, and I endeavor to be a worthy match for your talent with mine.

Gaaaaaah!! This is fricking amazing. You are amazing at writing!!

This and room and board have become my new obsession

Please keep up the good work!! I will always look forward to the new updates!

Beautiful! Now all we need is either Razer to get the guts to speak his feelings or Phoenix to say it first and this will become perfect! Keep up the fantastic work! Give my regards to Robin!

*lots of claps*

i say, well done. very well done

Ouch. I do feel sorry for Razer, despite his prickles. We'll resolve to be nicer to them from now on. In the meantime, a nice, long cuddle will do him good. They might have to make it a regular thing. It will be beneficial to his health, I'm sure.

Reading it from your end, I'm also doubly happy with how our separate pieces dove-tail. Kudos to you, partner in crime. Kudos. Keep up the good work!

I am totally against rape and all other abuse of women. That being said, Title IX basically makes it so any manipulative bitch with half a brain can ruin a guy's life. Your and Robin's story is taking a very serious turn... so get to hinting at that happy ending, please?

Yay !! , Razer should write a book on how to deal with bullies. Can't wait for more please keep writing

Awww, damn, son! Damn! :O

YAY! So happy to see this uploaded so fast! I wondered how the hell that fight had broken out and whooo, did this deliver. Blasted cheerleaders! Excellent argument, of course, but Razer unfortunately didn't win it, because she cheated. It all makes perfect, horrible sense.

Poor Razer! He should have listened to his own advice about self-sacrifice... well, not that he ended up dead, but he's going to be dead inside, if he won't let himself have sweet little Red Sparrow cuddles to warm his heart. I foresee it happening all too well. Phoenix might not be his one true love, but he'll be the last person that will ever feel love from Razer if Phoenix and Jak can't hero their way into saving Razer's ass. Hopefully being acknowledged as gay might help defend Razer from the cheerleader's accusations, but who knows? I certainly don't and will be eagerly waiting for more! I'm so happy that Rule 39 and Room and Board exist! Seriously, it's the high point of my day when one of you fine people updates. I keep rereading various chapters, in fact. :O

Hey, since you're often inspired by music and you (presumably) came up with Razer's little nickname for Phoenix, I recommend finding Maybe Sparrow by Neko Case. Probably not to your taste (she has a weird sort of folk inspiration sound and often surreal imagery in most of her songs; my favorites being Dirty Knife, Blacklisted, and I Wish I Was the Moon), but if nothing else, the lyrics seem vaguely fitting.

Oh my sparrow it's too late
Your body limp beneath my feet
Your dusty eyes cold as clay
You didn't hear my warning

Phoenix is going to have to convince Razer that it's Razer who really needs to be rescued, from himself of all people. :1

Also, a bit from I Wish I Was the Moon, because it dawned on me that is a very Razer song, especially right now...

God blessed me, I'm a free man
With no place free to go
I'm paralyzed and collared-tight
No pills for what I fear

Ha ha, but then I can apply her stuff to damn near anything.