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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh.
You are truly talented, this story wasn't just your average Slave/Master scenario. (FIRST OF ALL ALTAIR UNF) I'm not that much of a Malik fan, but I do think this couple is one of the best ones in AssCreed history. I'm sure that this is almost everyone's favorite part about your writing, but I really like how you made Altair a little uneasy and you allowed him to THINK about what was happening. I also love the pain/pleasure pattern you brought out in Altair, because there were times when what he was feeling was not at all pleasurable, and I think you did an amazing job of interpreting that. I know I'm new to this site and you're my first author to read, but this is probably the best AssCreed fic I've read in a while. Well done.
You are truly talented, this story wasn't just your average Slave/Master scenario. (FIRST OF ALL ALTAIR UNF) I'm not that much of a Malik fan, but I do think this couple is one of the best ones in AssCreed history. I'm sure that this is almost everyone's favorite part about your writing, but I really like how you made Altair a little uneasy and you allowed him to THINK about what was happening. I also love the pain/pleasure pattern you brought out in Altair, because there were times when what he was feeling was not at all pleasurable, and I think you did an amazing job of interpreting that. I know I'm new to this site and you're my first author to read, but this is probably the best AssCreed fic I've read in a while. Well done.
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. The way you write the characters is impressive, somewhat how I'd imagine them to be in real life and the story is paced very well. We need more bottom!Alty out there ;) Keep up the good work!
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March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Malik just admit you loved it! That tough man persona isn't working anymore and you know it! Altair is getting better at figuring you out and besides you're sick, your brother can't cook, and Altair is much better company!
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Even sick he still has an effect on Altair!!! Finally the boy calls him!!! Friday should be fun >:) I cannot wait to see what is in store for these two
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait for the next chapters! I check every day!
I know I've reviewed before, but I just want you to know how amazing this is!
I absolutely love how you depict Malik and his bdsm interests. And the way Altair is just being mind fucked by this amazing guy.
I'm just sitting here wondering what's going to happen next!! <3
I know I've reviewed before, but I just want you to know how amazing this is!
I absolutely love how you depict Malik and his bdsm interests. And the way Altair is just being mind fucked by this amazing guy.
I'm just sitting here wondering what's going to happen next!! <3
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay I'll give Maria a break since she did call Altair out on exactly what he was in denial about since day one. But she's right though and at least she could get some sense into that thick stubborn skull of his :) Now to see what Malik does >:)
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February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What is he thinking now??!?! I really hope it's for advice and nothing more >:(
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February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ALTAIR!!!! YOU TURN YOUR ASS AROUND RIGHT THIS INSTANT!!!! What the HELL is he thinking?!!? Oh wait....HE'S NOT!!! Malik better not let him walk away!!! Malik fight for that stubborn ass man!!
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February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Someone's getting stronger and more confident in themselves!!!! Love how Altair challenged Malik then got whipped!! HOT!!!!
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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think we all knew that he was a little off center from the beginning, so that shouldn't really come as a surprise that you envision Leonardo that way. Haha, hope your morning goes as well as your night did. Thanks for the updates. :)