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May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Malik has you HOOKED Alty!!!!
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOSEBLEED!!! Best chapter yet!!!! Altair continues to grow and thrive and I see some confidence blooming :)
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May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw Malik being affectionate is adorable! Can't wait to see what happens next ! Brilliant job :)
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May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello~
I admit that I have been following this story for QUITE some time, and I realized that I have yet to leave you a review! I wish to remedy this. First off, I do very much love this story and trust me when I say that is rarely something that I freely admit. I check for updates almost every day and I'm thrilled by how much and how often you update.
I also really enjoy how you capture this BDSM lifestyle, and how you keep the male ego such a major role in the whole of the story. This is something that a lot of writers utterly fail at, and it's the main reason I love this story so much. There is so much of a sense of pride and how the main character learns to put it away when necessary - and also how it's pointed out that this isn't just a sexual exercise but a social one as well. Really, honestly beautiful. I applaud you for this, I really do.
My only real complaint about this is the amount of spelling/grammar mistakes. Please don't take this as personal, honest, all writers make them. I would however suggest looking to find yourself a Beta reader perhaps that will help you hammer out these errors. The reason I make a point to say this at all is because there have been a few points throughout the story where they get to a point where it pulls me out of the beautiful scenario's you've written and forces me to reread over a few times. It probably doesn't help that I'm a huge spelling/grammar whore, I fully admit this.
In any case I wanted to tell you again you're a great writer, I love what you've written here and how you've portrayed this very elaborate and taboo art in an actual positive reflection. It's something that so few people can do.
Thank you so much for this awesome work of art and please keep writing so much more! I always look forward to seeing new chapters of this story :D
I admit that I have been following this story for QUITE some time, and I realized that I have yet to leave you a review! I wish to remedy this. First off, I do very much love this story and trust me when I say that is rarely something that I freely admit. I check for updates almost every day and I'm thrilled by how much and how often you update.
I also really enjoy how you capture this BDSM lifestyle, and how you keep the male ego such a major role in the whole of the story. This is something that a lot of writers utterly fail at, and it's the main reason I love this story so much. There is so much of a sense of pride and how the main character learns to put it away when necessary - and also how it's pointed out that this isn't just a sexual exercise but a social one as well. Really, honestly beautiful. I applaud you for this, I really do.
My only real complaint about this is the amount of spelling/grammar mistakes. Please don't take this as personal, honest, all writers make them. I would however suggest looking to find yourself a Beta reader perhaps that will help you hammer out these errors. The reason I make a point to say this at all is because there have been a few points throughout the story where they get to a point where it pulls me out of the beautiful scenario's you've written and forces me to reread over a few times. It probably doesn't help that I'm a huge spelling/grammar whore, I fully admit this.
In any case I wanted to tell you again you're a great writer, I love what you've written here and how you've portrayed this very elaborate and taboo art in an actual positive reflection. It's something that so few people can do.
Thank you so much for this awesome work of art and please keep writing so much more! I always look forward to seeing new chapters of this story :D
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May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Two updates in a row!!!! I am impressed!!!! Altair is smarter than he gives himself credit. Someone needs to do a drawing of Altair tied up as Ezio was in the paintings!!!
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May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AH YEAH!!!! Fun times in the bathroom!!!! I loved how Altair was embarrassed!!!!
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May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Leave it to Malik to be open and honest! Rauf asked and he received more than he probably wanted!
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! Altair is definitely getting more confident and comfortable in his own skin :)
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story doesn't nearly have the ammount of reviews it should. I dont normally read stories on this site with this many chapters, but let me say that every chapter has been amazing. You're incredibly descriptive (without being overly so) and write a really captivating relationship. Seeing an update today just made my day really fucking awesome. Keep up the great work, seriously.
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April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love Malik, he's so complicated and interesting... Altair has his work cut out for him. Excellent story!! Really loving it! Keep up the awesome work x :)