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for The Fox and Exile

by Killerbunny

person rayne
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great work! Please write more Ahri x Riven~
person Anon
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Moar
person darkdill
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work, it's about time someone came up with an Ahri yuri fic. Riven's certainly a good choice for a pairing, IMO.

Some sentences did run a little long, but that's a minor flaw.

Hope you can write a few more; maybe try Lux next time!
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Run-on_sentence