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This is weird and random....but I fapped like crazy!

Hmm... interesting. The time jump helped to explain the increased emotions that the two felt for each other and that was a fun and clever idea to reveal that secret about the Hyrule family line. The hot sex scene between the two in the later part of the chapter was just downright kinky and well written. My only complaint is, what about the spell? Will it just result in a miracle insemniation, or is there going to be a futa scene at some point? If it's the latter, then which girl will be receiving the transformation? I assume it's Zelda.

Also, focusing on her transformation into a centaur. Who did it? I might be focusing on an un-important point, but I'm curious if someone else with powerful magic could show up. Of course it might make more sense to wrap it all up next chapter with the final scene and then the wedding. In any case, good chapter and looking forward to the next chapter(s)

Please continue this! :D

a very ensnaring story you've started here. I look forward to seeing more of it and am glad that i read it first before anything else in my first time back after my absence. You captured Zelda and Maron's personalities perfectly and i was utterly fascinated by the bit involving the centaur lungs and hearts. A fine touch of brilliance to what is sure to be an excellent story.

Descendant of the Shadows
-Twisteddarkness

Very sweet and well written. I am looking forward to the fisting. With great anticipation :)
SailorNemesis

Wow it has been a long time since I saw anything come out that has been yours around here! I like this, its sweet and I can't wait for another sexy centaur story of yours, although just seeing you back doing anything is great!

wtf zelda as centaur thats so weird, i mean it is cool so far and kinda hot but so random! i like it tho, i wish it had sex tho thats wat were here for

This is looking to be a pretty sweet story. Looking forward to what you'll do next if you're continuing this story. I hope you do.