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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I gotta say it, you are pretty much (literally) writing the book on how Jak and Daxter AU/AR stories are supposed to be done. Both with Room and Board and now this one.
It flows naturally, you get a clear sense of what the world is like in this reality, what Daxter's background story is, the inclusion of demons and their functions and quircks(the telepathy bit in particular is really well done, doesn't feel cheesy like it does in some fictions, you made it unique by tying the actual feeling of emotion to it), and it's all so natural and most importantly, awesome to read.
And an update every friday! Yay! I have too much of an appetite for these two, that'll definitely help satisfy that for a little while, lol!
It flows naturally, you get a clear sense of what the world is like in this reality, what Daxter's background story is, the inclusion of demons and their functions and quircks(the telepathy bit in particular is really well done, doesn't feel cheesy like it does in some fictions, you made it unique by tying the actual feeling of emotion to it), and it's all so natural and most importantly, awesome to read.
And an update every friday! Yay! I have too much of an appetite for these two, that'll definitely help satisfy that for a little while, lol!
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December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, my neurons already malfunction. They need as much Jak x Daxter lovin' awesomeness as they can get!
Hehe, oh Damas, you so silly. *is eaten* And now the story reminds me of the Little Mermaid (with Jak as Ariel). Can't wait for next week!
Hehe, oh Damas, you so silly. *is eaten* And now the story reminds me of the Little Mermaid (with Jak as Ariel). Can't wait for next week!
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December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Also, I second Kuromei, I wanna find out about that medallion... it's a demon aphrodisiac, isn't it?
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December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with CrabRangoonMonster this does remind me of your Perfect Dark fic, which was very hott like this one is.
Please update more? :D
And Jak is too cute in this one, it's not even fair. Poor Dax will never be able to keep off.
Please update more? :D
And Jak is too cute in this one, it's not even fair. Poor Dax will never be able to keep off.
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December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yet another awesome chapter from you! ^^ this one especially cute too lol and no worries, there's no way I could ever flail you with a dish towel. Even if you do start new projects and not finish current ones *is watching you* -.0 BUT! You always make up for it with awesome updates soooo no harm done xDD
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December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww~! Gotta love that Jak n'Dax-warm-and-fuzzy goodness. XD
lol Damas is still as ornery as ever. Wonder if he'll change his tune, once he sees the medallion? I don't think he would've been able to see it, this first time, on account of Daxter's clinging-in-fright to Jak. There's obviously something about that thing the demons (I hesitate to call them that, but there's no better way to refer to them atm) know, but won't be telling Daxter for a while.
Until then, however? J&D alone-time goodness. ;3 Yay! ^///////w//////^
lol Damas is still as ornery as ever. Wonder if he'll change his tune, once he sees the medallion? I don't think he would've been able to see it, this first time, on account of Daxter's clinging-in-fright to Jak. There's obviously something about that thing the demons (I hesitate to call them that, but there's no better way to refer to them atm) know, but won't be telling Daxter for a while.
Until then, however? J&D alone-time goodness. ;3 Yay! ^///////w//////^
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December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*is grinning like an idiot and can't stop* This has completely perked up my week. Made it all worth while. *le sigh* Damn that boy's hot when he snarly and protective. I appreciate the purry side, too. There needs to be more purry-Jak involved in all things sexy, just like there needs to be more horn fondling and inadvertent kissing. Dark, sexy rumblings for the win!! And we're not even to the really sexy stuff yet!! *heart*
Don't worry about the Muse; she's more interested in turning you to her own purposes than death and dismemberment at this point. Play the cards right and you might end up with two of us on your tail.
Don't worry about the Muse; she's more interested in turning you to her own purposes than death and dismemberment at this point. Play the cards right and you might end up with two of us on your tail.
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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New story and regular updates!! *does happy dance* And don't worry dear, not mad that you started something new. In fact I'm happy, that means we get to enjoy your awesomeness even more ^^ and this story sounds hellavu interesting.
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December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Or you could post it all... now? :D 'Cause I'm really curious about this one, it kind of reminds me of Perfect Dark right now (your fic, not the game).
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December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Duuuuuuuude~ O3O Not only is this an awesome-sounding take on J&D, but regular, weekly updates? I am gonna be all over this sucker. XD
See you next week!^w^
See you next week!^w^