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*reading chapter* Hee hee, Mar... Oh, no!... yay, Damas!... Awww, cuddles...

*reads second author's note* ..... *falls dramatically to knees* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooo......

Don't. You. DARE break up the smut like that. ;___; That's the worst idea I've ever heard of, and you're a sick little writer for even thinking of it.

Kidding~ *glomp* I love ya, love your J&D, and long story short I've enjoyed this past year of ficcage. ^w^ Looking forward to next year! =D

Well, I'm sure glad that Santa!Jak did drop by your house after all xDD and don't worry, we have all wanted to spontaneously sing silly songs at some point of our lives lol But back to the chapter, poor little Daxxie! D: Dramatic chapter this was! XD And NO! You will not leave us hanging~~~ You will give us that smut scene completely~~~ lol

See, now, this is why I love your stuff. Here we are at chap. 3 and you've eliminated all potential sources of conflict. Big badass daddy deamon (who really isn't all that badass seemingly) has given in, the kiddiwinkies love teh hooman and the deamons in general are nicer people than people. I can think of 1/2 doz. tropes off the top of my head, plus variations, that you could use to move the plot along, or you could do something totally new. I cannot begin to guess what you will do. I cannot wait to find out.

...trots off to corner of the room, throws self down on floor with a huge sigh, begins nibbling at one claw on a back foot while throwing tail over nose and muzzle leaving only eyes showing, staring at the author, unblinkingly, trying to will the next chapter to appear...

EEEEEEEEEEE, Tess. I can totally imagine her doing the cooing thing too, especially as Keira drags her out the door.

And I assume so, but need this confirmed: "Mar" is essentially " The Kid", right?

Yay for Widgit cuteness!!! Damn, I love that boy. Hyperactive, precocious, and completely oblivious to personal boundaries. The perfect younger brother. We could rule the world with that boy under our--Wait. Someone tried that already. Never mind then; moving on!

This chapter gives me all sorts of warm fuzzies, from the why Tess is cooing over Daxter, to them curled up in the morning, patiently amused brothers and protective gestures. And wing-boners!!! *falls over giggling* So damn cute. Jak is so far in over his head, and he has no idea. And this is just the beginning. Complete awesomeness.

Have I mentioned recently that I love this fic? 'Cuz I do... Little fuzzy hearts all over the place.

Poor Daxxie, he's gone far too long without a proper meal or bath. Then an almost heart attack to great him in the morning, with a side order of tall and threatening!


Oh, hott kissing action, and Jak stopped it? Somethings up, and I can't wait to find out now. Curses, I can't wait a week! I proclaim every day to be Friday.

Everybody now: D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

*squeeeeeeeee* Hooray!!! That was so, so, so, so *an hour later* CUTE!!! And cute little Mar was like the cherry on top! Yay! Totally loved it, you seriously never disappoint! Lol Oh, and a Merry Christmas to you too! Hope Santa-Jak drops by your house! XDD lol

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww~!! Jak has a little brother! So cute. *huggles* XD And Damas has certainly calmed down. If Jak is sure Daxter will be staying, then there's nothing to worry about. ^w^ And Tess and Keira sound as awesome as ever. Tess' cooing sounded adorable. X3

lmao Something tells me Samos and Dax will get along as well as they ever did. X3 *gigglesnort* I can NOT wait to see that. XD And, of course, the warm-and-fuzziness. ^//w//^

See you later!