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January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Is there gonna be a sequel?
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Oh my god this was the perfect ending! I would be very pleased to see a return to this 'verse.
((yes captcha, thicknesses. good to know you know there is porn to be had here.))
((yes captcha, thicknesses. good to know you know there is porn to be had here.))
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January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
MUST. KNOW. MORE. ABOUT. THE. SCROLLS.
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January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*uber squee of happiness* Words cannot adequately convey how happy I am with this little fic. I've been trying for three days, and my skills as an English Major still fail me horribly. This was above and beyond anything I could have ever asked for and it was exceptionally sweet of you to take this on for me in the first place. The fact that you had so much fun writing it along the way, well, that just makes it all the more special. *super-hugs* Thank you so, so, so very much. It means a lot to me, just in case that wasn't obvious by now.
I am more than up for a revisit in the future. *grins* AND I still owe you something in return. Like twice over now.
Thank you, a million times and more, thank you.
I am more than up for a revisit in the future. *grins* AND I still owe you something in return. Like twice over now.
Thank you, a million times and more, thank you.
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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh.... my.... God!!! 'twas amazing! 'twas fantastic! 'twas beautiful! I'm speechless! Will you ever stop amazing me?! I can't wait for you to continue with Room and Board now O.O. You and Grimreaperchibi are absolutely amazing! Keep up the good work guys! And a happy New Year! ^^
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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Totally hot final chapter and epilogue for me! XD I've been sick as a dog for nearly a week, so this just brightened my day. X3 (To be fair, I'm doing a lot better today, but coughing is still coughing.)
Again, totally hot. xD Though the bit where Jak stopped channeling was a little surprising. Makes sense, but still surprising. (Somehow, I imagine Tess channels yellow eco. X3 Just guessing.) But the thought of more of this demonverse tickles my fancy. Samos' suggestion that Daxter could learn to channel eco certainly could lead to more. I'm also wondering who else would end up being "demonized" in this universe.
A nice, fun romp into unexplored territory. That's the only way I can describe this fic. Loved it, and I look forward to whatever comes next. ^w^
Again, totally hot. xD Though the bit where Jak stopped channeling was a little surprising. Makes sense, but still surprising. (Somehow, I imagine Tess channels yellow eco. X3 Just guessing.) But the thought of more of this demonverse tickles my fancy. Samos' suggestion that Daxter could learn to channel eco certainly could lead to more. I'm also wondering who else would end up being "demonized" in this universe.
A nice, fun romp into unexplored territory. That's the only way I can describe this fic. Loved it, and I look forward to whatever comes next. ^w^
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woot! More Dark (well, Dark-esque) Jak! I really should extend my thanks to Grimreaperchibi myself; she seems to be a major source of inspiration for you, which in turn means more for your own fans to enjoy.
Really like the premise of this one: Daxter as the sacrificial "maiden"/street rat works quite nicely. Have to admit though, that opening scene reminded me of a somewhat darker one in When True Night Falls. Anyways, I like how easily the plot advances from one chapter to the next, Daxter's reactions to the demons (especially Damas) are astoundingly cute, and the action scene with the metal head was well done.
Also, writing the whole story and then stringing it out? Cruel, but at least it means something to look forward to at the end of each week. Looking forward to the next installment.
Really like the premise of this one: Daxter as the sacrificial "maiden"/street rat works quite nicely. Have to admit though, that opening scene reminded me of a somewhat darker one in When True Night Falls. Anyways, I like how easily the plot advances from one chapter to the next, Daxter's reactions to the demons (especially Damas) are astoundingly cute, and the action scene with the metal head was well done.
Also, writing the whole story and then stringing it out? Cruel, but at least it means something to look forward to at the end of each week. Looking forward to the next installment.
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn Dax, sounds like a bad laceration! Must suck.
Ooh, Damas is finally being concerned for Dax for once, we now have a soft side! Now exploit it. :3
Hmm, Jak wants to talk? I hope it ends in sex. Lots of sex.
Also, every day is now Friday. Don't believe what the Man tells you, the rest of the days of the week aren't true.
Ooh, Damas is finally being concerned for Dax for once, we now have a soft side! Now exploit it. :3
Hmm, Jak wants to talk? I hope it ends in sex. Lots of sex.
Also, every day is now Friday. Don't believe what the Man tells you, the rest of the days of the week aren't true.
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*gladly collects her Widgit push* I will always take the blame for something so damn cute. Gods, I love this kid, and him being Jak's little brother will always be nine different kinds of awesome in my book. And I do, I love this fic so much, I want to do impractical things with it (get your mind out of the gutter).
I always cringe when I come across the Metalhead claws into thigh part. I get sympathy pains. Holy damn, that sucks. And then having to listen to a body being broken into base components? Passing out was a very kind thing for you to do. Lunch would have been what I lost...from like three weeks ago. *shudders* But, as always, protective!Jak makes up from all the squirmy-ew moments. I really do love the "fix it fix it fix it" mantra, too. Talk about having one very freaked out demon on your hands. Nothing like a good dose of "Holy Shit!" to get people's butts in gear.
And just to be evil, I support your plan for dragging it out two pages at a time. Great way to keep the tension high. *snicker* The only question is, is there enough to drag it out for ten more weeks? Oh no, there isn't? Oh darn, you need to add more to it... *evil laughter* Yeah, seriously though, ignore me. You've done more than enough already. I could not ask for more. Thank you! *hugs*
I always cringe when I come across the Metalhead claws into thigh part. I get sympathy pains. Holy damn, that sucks. And then having to listen to a body being broken into base components? Passing out was a very kind thing for you to do. Lunch would have been what I lost...from like three weeks ago. *shudders* But, as always, protective!Jak makes up from all the squirmy-ew moments. I really do love the "fix it fix it fix it" mantra, too. Talk about having one very freaked out demon on your hands. Nothing like a good dose of "Holy Shit!" to get people's butts in gear.
And just to be evil, I support your plan for dragging it out two pages at a time. Great way to keep the tension high. *snicker* The only question is, is there enough to drag it out for ten more weeks? Oh no, there isn't? Oh darn, you need to add more to it... *evil laughter* Yeah, seriously though, ignore me. You've done more than enough already. I could not ask for more. Thank you! *hugs*
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December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, the sacrifices-self-for-member-of-adopted-clan trope. Excellent! I was guessing the jealous-other-challeges-newcomer's-right-to-membership with the jealous other possibly being named Erol. (Your choice is sooo much better!) Also, "to be concluded?" It's ending so soon? I can feel the withdrawal pains already, arrrgh!
Finally...
Whines piteously at having distressed the Author, from whom all blessings flow. Biting self in agonized contrition, slinks, belly scales scraping the ground, over to where the Author was last seen. At a great expense of personal energy, materializes a pound of the Author's favorite recreational chemical in hopes that the sacrifice will coax the Author out of hiding and swears a great and terrible oath to never again do anything to frighten the Author!
Finally...
Whines piteously at having distressed the Author, from whom all blessings flow. Biting self in agonized contrition, slinks, belly scales scraping the ground, over to where the Author was last seen. At a great expense of personal energy, materializes a pound of the Author's favorite recreational chemical in hopes that the sacrifice will coax the Author out of hiding and swears a great and terrible oath to never again do anything to frighten the Author!