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person Symba
schedule May 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I've read this story more than I should (for times in two days) and I have a question.... Would the be so kind to make a sequel, even if it's a one-shot?? How would Daxter adapt to being mated to a demon? And what kind of eco would he channel:?
person Gina
schedule January 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this story. Please say there'll be a sequel? I got the bad guy for ya. A mix between Mizo and Krew. ;)
Any way I'll keep looking to see if you'll have a sequel or not. Now I'm onto reading Safety.
person Emily
schedule November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
There needs to be a sequel to this. Featuring the hated Errol or Blitz. Oh! or Duke Skyhead! LoL.
person Angie
schedule October 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
There needs to be a sequel to this story.
person Csi Forsyth
schedule January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"He could see his own shivers, and the miserable slant of his own ears, and the tears beading unbidden at the corners of his eyes."

Oh goodness, pull out my heart why don't you?

I love your vision for demon!Jak and am now hooked.
person Csi Forsyth
schedule January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"He lolled against that muscled frame, basking in the heat like a little sand lizard, babbling because he could." <3

"Jak raised his wings a bit, maybe some sort of salute.  It’s a Daxter.  The wry grin on his face was perfectly visible." Oh my goodness, so effin' adorable!
person kitsuneluvuh
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This so needs a sequel. Also, can I have permission to possibly do spin-offs of this? :D I really love it.
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So, now i've also read this story as well. I must say it's not as good as other stories from you, because everything happens so fast and at some point, it was even weird. Daxter had never seen a demon nor kissed anyone, but has no problem kissing one? Feeled kinda strange, usually you have the perfect amount of "time" for things in your stories.

Buuut anyway, i liked it and it was fun to read. I'm always amazed what you're able to do with those two. =)
person Revai
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea how "anon" snucked into the name-field, but that comment was from me.

You know I've been following your stories since 4 years know? Think I can call myself a "fan" know. anyway - please continue with your great work!
person Anne
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awe, just too cute! I know it's finished and all, but I could so see a continuance. You know, of them teaching Daxter after Mar woke them up. And maybe of the humans eventually finding him all over again once he's stronger and with Jak and Jak gets to teach Veger a lesson or two with maybe Daxter cheering him on or something. And maybe more on their relationship or something, even just Daxter's relationship with some of the other demons and maybe gaining more of Damas's approval too...

Just a suggestion. *Shrugs*