rate_review Reviews

Loving it so far, nice to find an ongoing Elder Scrolls story with a nice balance of smut and plot. Will definitely keep reading.

I was under the impression you would make like every other writer and simply make your character the most skilled and experienced 'lover' from the start. Nice to see some realism in this baby. Much obliged for your continued work. Not many like it and each chapter is a refreshing read. I've no more suggestions concerning the game for the moment, so i'll remain observant and review until a thought comes to mind. *Tips hat*

I must encourage you, as Aela is one of my favorite people in Skyrim, and its always fun to see other people's interpretations of of the world at large. To see your decisions and their justifications is great along with the interactions with characters.

I really liked the fact that you take the time to build up the story, give the character some added depth and your humor (speaking of course about the sarcasm), instead of just starting the story with a debaucherous spree of sex (of course... This would be the site to find that). I really enjoy reading this and look forward to updates!

Wow. After reading this, I feel like my fic is crap. The dialogue is way better, and your character is really well developed, even though its only 3 chapters in. I love it!! But now I hate mine, so its sort of bittersweet lol.

Really very enjoyable so far. Im really probably the only one who is going to suggest this, but...Temba Wide-Arm?

The bear pelt woman in... Ivarstead?

What about one of the Thieves Guild women. Vex, or maybe Sapphire.

Cookings a bitch really. So much to mentaly organize and recall...but the results were always worth it. (And considering businesses, expensive to sell too!) Love the style so far. I personally prefer a more steamy deliverence of the sex scenes and cant help but think this one was a tad bland in style (but i'm just one reviewer out of many, so who gives a shit right?) Keep going like this and you'll certainly go places. Requests-Wise, i suggest we give that Lady in white run (the 'omg i need mammoth tusks!' one) a shot. Always did look like she'd offer a well-proportioned...'reward'.

I find this amazing so far. This is one of the reasons I love Oblivion and Skyrim so much: making the character alive by giving it a story. I like how you described Kai's stay in Riverwood as well as his thoughts on Sven and Faendal. Thank you for taking time off of Skyrim to actually write this.

Really nice, your character is well written, and you know how to write to keep your audience interested. I am looking forward eagerly to reading the next chapter and how Kai will handle bleak fall barrows and Camilla. Only suggestion is slightly longer chapters. But only if you can keep ending them on good notes.