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Great story, I love Kai and his sense of humor. Midway through reading I had an idea to maybe incorporate my Skyrim guy, if you are interested or just want a run-down on my Skyrim dude, shoot me an email. My email is masonhart@satx.rr.com

More than just 10 people read this, I assure you. I know of 10 friends that have all read this story, and myself makes 11. Plus you have some 14,000 hits, so I imagine it's a lot more than just us. I like the idea of skipping training unless you can come up with something unique to do. I don't imagine there being much combat or sex scenes during Greybeard training. Plus the Greybeard part of the game always felt like a drag to me. One of those 'here's a bunch of info and some new abilities' section that is apart of nearly every game.

I know you mentioned you wouldn't be progressing on the Kailev/Lydia front, but I think that's a shame; you've got a lot of chemistry building up between them. Though I think it would be difficult to pull it off. I just don't picture Lydia putting up with Kailev sleeping around with lots of women, and it would probably be difficult for him to hide if they travel together all the time. Although, based off the characterizations of the Skyrim women so far, maybe they're a lot more open to 'companionship' than one would think. Perhaps it's even seen as practical for traveling companions to satisfy each others urges when necessary.

Either way, I like this story (not just as a smut story either). I find Kailev hilarious and I love the camaraderie between Lydia Kailev. The combats are pretty good too, and I can easily picture them happening in my mind as well.

it seems with each released chapter the story simply gets better and better the flirting between lydia and kai is humorous as well as captivating i look forward to seeing what happens between the two, in regards to the dragonborn training that should be added if you want to add it people will read it all the same it could be a good idea to write that chapter if you need time to plan what kai is gonna do after his training, would certianly like to see what he does in riften haha

Training with the Graybeards has some potential, certainly. But it depends on what you want to write really. Are you interested in writing that sequence, or would you enjoy referencing it and instead getting to the next adventure you have planned for Kai? I'm for whatever, honestly. Though a Graybeards scene would probably require a lot of tweaking to keep things interesting, this is after all one of the scenes that most players are very familiar with and have played through many times. If that player intended to do the main quest at least.

Keep up the good work.

I just wanted to put in my two cents and say I hope you know there's more than ten people reading. I check back every couple days for an update and I'm a fan of the quality writing fused together with combat and extremely well...sexy...sex scenes. I hope you keep it up man!

Best Skyrim story I've read so far. Keep up the excellent work.

Great job, keep it up please!

just though you should know they're are more then five people readily checking this, i do enjoy your writing style, kai is an character that makes this more than your run of the mill fic and hope you go far with the story would be interesting to read

OK, not gonna lie, I fucking love Kai's sense of humor in the story, at first I kinda "dafucked" at an argonian fanfic but You paint a nice picture with this, I hope to see more chapters soon

So I've been reading ever since the first chapter, and I have to say I'm very impressed with your skill as a writer. Not just with dialogue, but in grasping the personalities of each character. The sex scenes are very well detailed, and Kai seems to be shaping up to be quite the player in Skyrim. It gets me wondering as to what would happen should his sexual exploits with human women get out to the public. How would they react towards him, since he's an Argonian sleeping with humans? Two women in Whiterun who everybody in town knows in just a few days, and two women who work in the same area of town, no less. Will anybody ever find out that Kai's been cutting a swath through the women(and undergarments) of Skyrim, and if so, would there be a possible storyline out of that in the future?