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I was starting to get worried. This story is too good to end anytime soon!

Glad to see you're still working on this - I love this story. Keep up the good work!

Great story! Keep up the good work, I love dropping in on it every few months and catching up. Seriously one of the better Fan fictions I have read.

I really like this story for a couple of reasons.

1. It's not hoplessly sappy with romance between the Dragonborn and another character.
2. You're using a race few use. I'm pretty sure most stories had Imperials or Nord, some Redguards, or Dunmer.
3. Your character seems to like the different ladies of Skyrim always nice to see a good mix.

Is there any chance you'll do Dawnguard or any other DLC? I just love Serana and I think Frea of Dragonborn also has potential.

In any way, keep up the good work!

I like this story.

I'll expecting next chapter!

I love the story. I've been checking in every week hoping for a new chapter. Im kinda hoping to read more about Kai's sister though, anyway keep writing:)

I've been lurking on here for months reading every chapter to the story, and I finally made an account to review this story specifically. I really respect that the story isn't just pure sex all the time (not that there's anything wrong with that) and that Kai's adventures are actually entertaining. I have to say that I love the dynamic between Kai and Lydia, it makes it worth reading in between the sex scenes. Keep up the good work.

You, sir, are a cruel man. Been waiting chapters for those two to get down and dirty. That end part was getting super hot too. Otherwise, a particularly good chapter. I really admire how much content you squeeze into each chapter. They always feel substantial and worth the wait. My one criticism would be that I didn't really notice when Kai lost one of his swords. So when I finally got to a paragraph later on that referenced he only had one, I was a little confused and had to backtrack to find that it was mentioned in one sentence, just felt a bit glossed over. Nothing major, just broke the flow a little bit. I feel it should be a little more explicit when the main character's equipment/status undergoes a significant change. That was my only gripe though. Lydia talking dirty was as amazing as I thought it would be, hope to see a little more of that in the next chapter. Nothing over the top, just a curse here and there adds a lot to the scene. Keep up the great work!

great work i love it poor kai swords are not cheap