rate_review Reviews

I love this, It made me laugh, I would love if you wrote more of the story. :) Pretty please.

Okay, You've caught my attention with this first first chapter and I demand more! Maybe it's because I'm a depraved Scorpion fangirl who loves to see him torment and molest poor little Tundra. I also like the fact that you made Sub-Zero's cyborg armour removable and still requiring things like sleep since none of the Lin Kuei are pure robots. Though it would be nice to see Smoke pop up sometime to rescue Sub-Zero, maybe have Scorpion torment him as well, but please! More!

i am waay interested in reading many more chapters of this to come!

Damn you Scorpion! Stop reinventing our past experiences! But I supposed since you've begun, you might ad well FINISH IT!