This was a great read. The setup of the story made think on the actual begining of the first Tomb Raider game with wolves that are killed by Lara (actually I try to forget the visuals of that scene, it has been a long time since the game came). Lara might certainly have some bad karma when we are talking about wolves.
Anyway the detail I especially like about your story was how you used Lara's pony tale to explain how the domination took place. Hot and very sexy. Keep the good work.
While I will continue working my way through the Slumber Party-verse, I noticed you'd written a lot of videogame stories. I saw that this didn't have the MCD tag, so...
Okay, on the one hand, Lara was just fucked by a dog, and she's a sex slave.
On the other hand, she's alive, which is never a given in Tomb Raider fics (for whatever reason) and she seems happy with her situation, which is also not a given in Tomb Raider fics. One needs to appreciate these things when they happen.
Something I'd like to point out is that you managed to sidestep a lot of the inherent squickiness of bestiality by making Corinth sentient. I still found it a little gross every once in a while (sentient or not, it's still a dog), but a lot of it was surprisingly hot.
Finally, I think I may have spotted a typo.
"Please, don't... it feels so good in me?"
Granted, perhaps Lara's supposed to be confused, but I felt like maybe that was supposed to be a period.
You ought to continue this one.
Again, you are so good at telling so much in such short stories, I was actually surprised (but far from disappointed) to see Lara having a more comfortable time and a happy ending of sorts too (collars ooh!) - no over-hung Centaurs or evil Sheep-God statues! Loved it ^_^.
I'm not usually a fan of dog-sex, since it seems a little degrading to the women involved. But you managed to make it kind of classy here – giving Corinth mystical powers and more intelligence than the average hound gave the whole scenario a kind of mythical quality which steered it away from the usual low-class bestiality porn that you often get with dog-on-woman material like this.
Great to read!
Lara's really working her way through the animal kingdom isn't she, lol!
Next up... dolphin gangbang!!