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for The First's Sister

by lycanthrope

schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
finally, caught back up, i am!
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
excellent story i like how you jump between characters gives the illusion your reading two stories but really its only one keep up the good work
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
u couble posted the chapter
otherwise, i love how quick the warden is to get out of shoe shopping, lmao
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's good as always
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
stealing the lamp
please use spellcheck of some sort?
otherwise, this is quite the delightful read
person Snowfire
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, I really, really like this. It's a lovely idea and you're implementing it masterfully.

Secondly - and please don't take this the wrong way - would you like a beta?
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
liking this very much excellent story keep up the good work
schedule November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
excellecent story please keep going i really wanna see where you take this so deffinetly keep up the good work