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for Peach's Bad Day

by agroofus

schedule November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing, pure sadism at it's finest, plus you write well and are genuinely very creative. Doubtless you will get flamed to hell and back, however please keep writing. One small request, could you please add some sexual activity, though the sadism was more than enough, it just seems a logical progression and conclusion.
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved this and am sad it's over
sequel?
person animekid
schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! WTF....this is awesome. Like wow I never thought so many ways of torture in SMB! My mind is blow. Damn don't stop this til the end! Even if you get flames.
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn, you are an artist when it comes to titty torture!
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Titflesh.

That's what I'm gonna remember about this fic.