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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very well written, very hot. The world felt very warm and inviting. The descriptions were in detailed enough to make you feel as though you're right there with the characters. I agree, the intercourse scene was a bit short, but I'm not one to judge as most of the ones I write are pretty short, too. I'd actually like to find out a little about what happens to each character after, maybe a few lines of either "good byes" or "let's do this again some time."