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for Bad Romance

by grimreaperchibi

person GMB
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story.....

Is there gonna be a sequel? Pregnant Jak is cute. Please?
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I promise, I won't tell. What, you kidding? You know too many of my own embarrassing tangents and whatnot. I'd be a fool to tread on yours.

Anyways. I share your resistance to m-preg, and yet... and yet. You made it work, somehow. Maybe it's the eco factor? They're so physically screwed up in cannon from all the eco exposure that I can mentally make that little jump to them being able to have a child together. Maybe it's the way you wrote it. They're not running around shopping for maternity clothes and giggling like idiots, decorating the nursery in flowers and ottsels. They're realistically terrified. You did a great job with believability here, and I envy that.

Regardless of where it came from I like this little fic very much, and I'm glad you kept chipping away at it until it was finished. Kudos to you for a job well done!
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heee~ I loved it!