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for Judith's Punishment

by JayDee

person Anon
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Some punishments are a lot easier to endure than others. In fact, this sort of punishment could invoke a wave of misbehavior... ;)
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Best line: "Judith stood and crossed her arms, inadvertently accentuating her inexplicably tight jumper", :DDD

So glad you wrote another Half Life story JD – I can't believe how few of them there are here, given how undeniably hot Alyx Vance is. Great descriptions of the heavy facial and Alyx's crow-bar-like strap-on. But I think Judith enjoyed herself a little too much for it to be real punishment ;)