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for Strange yet Alluring

by RamDragon

person Anon
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

This poem evokes both vivid pictures and bittersweet emotions, truly well done in so short a work. Thank you!
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see you're back responding to the challenge prompts. I always enjoy these poems, and the title of this one really captures it well. Strange but alluring indeed, with a sweet feeling of familiarity between your characters, and yet Zero seems well able to surprise and delight X. Nicely done!